maybe 56k warning

[name13]

heres a couple new sigs
usually psd packs are for learning purposes but this is for teaching purposes i would like for people to donwload it and look at what i did and tell me what i did wrong and what i need to improve on and some less expierenced people can too https://www.media fire.com/?77vvn5r3x3b627a

[CrazyConservative]

Interesting name for the first one...

Anyways, I like the 4th one the best actually.

The first one there is near no flow... It looks like you just threw stuff on it and left it.
The second one, is good. You followed a tutorial for the text I'm guessing..?

The deadspace one would be better if the BG consisted of more than c4ds on some gradient. Blend them into the Backround and the implement the render into them.

Fourth one looks cool. I like how you duplicated and made it stand out.

5th one... No comment.

[name13]

First one's three layers / (I removed the first one) now you can't tell which one I'm talking about
Edit:I fucked up this thread bad Ill fix it tomorrow or maybe at school if I get the chance

[Ryguy]

I will take a look at these when I get home from school.

[name13]

5th one... No comment.

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[CrazyConservative]

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Ok.

I don't see how a C4D and toast go together.
There is no flow at all.
Lighting= no.

[S4KD]

lol toast

[name13]

i thought the lighting was fine

[CrazyConservative]

i thought the lighting was fine

Depends. Is the upper right corner being blasted off by a soft brush making light, or is it eaten off? I thought it was Number 1.

[name13]

happy toast wins over any flaw

[Storm]

got some nice works by the looks but i really cant see them at that tiny size, dont upload it to photobucket or image shack it resizes the images, if its something that big sign up to deviantart and upload it there

[name13]

Now actually that's the size of the wall I believe it's 200x700 or 300x700
I had them up but I took them down and I am signed up to deviantart