[Text] Haze VS. Linked³

[Evelyn]

This is the first round of the Text Portion of the Rap tournament!


Rules;

200 Characters Minimum

800 Characters Maximum

Three "Rounds / Turns" Per person - Unless You Give Up

48 Hours to Respond Or "Check-In"

Lyrics must be Original, Any Plagiarism will disqualify you.



Judging Will Start after The "Three Rounds" have been completed, There will be a form to fill out.


Haze Begins.

Good Luck!

[Haze]

Oh yeah, forgot about checking in.

Nearly done (h)

[InCapacitated]

Hey dude you ain't on the street yo
Will you beat me? thats a no
I'm in here waiting
making something you ain't wanting
i see you making
While i'm in here relaxing
I'm like Obama
while you there cry to your mama
Don't even think of winning
because later you'd be hating


beat that

[Kanye]

lol. haze is supposed to start. but not bad

[InCapacitated]

forgot lol
Can haze be 2nd?
please evelyn

[Evelyn]

Sure, that "First" Thing is just so we don't spend 5 days arguing over who starts.


Good luck guys!

[Haze]

This is just round one,
by the end you'll be done,
ill be crowned the king and this shit will be won.
I'm linked in with this flow,
the words just come out, like the smoke from this dro.
Dont even respond,
because my shit is beyond,
me compared to you? it just doesnt correspond.

Beat you? I'll beat you off like MJ
I mean your weak ass rhymes, but I know you like it that way
The words in your raps, they just scream out "GAY!"
But don't fret, don't worry because you arent alone
I know a couple of other guys who like a good bone
They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
Just go home and stop,
Your life is a flop,
Because the thing you're not
Is where I am.. at the top.

u.

[ShAg123]

OMG I WANT INTHIS SHIT XD

[InCapacitated]

This is just round one,
by the end you'll be done,
ill be crowned the king and this shit will be won.
I'm linked in with this flow,
the words just come out, like the smoke from this dro.
Dont even respond,
because my shit is beyond,
me compared to you? it just doesnt correspond.

Beat you? I'll beat you off like MJ
I mean your weak ass rhymes, but I know you like it that way
The words in your raps, they just scream out "GAY!"
But don't fret, don't worry because you arent alone
I know a couple of other guys who like a good bone
They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
Just go home and stop,
Your life is a flop,
Because the thing you're not
Is where I am.. at the top.

u.

Orly your a king?
I thought only you were a janitor in burger king
Why you smoking
to get over this "Thing"?
Your shit is beyond
Your Shit? it makes me not to respond

Why u mad bro
Oh you've been smoking dro
Your worse than McBullshit
Even though i just created that shit
I just did something nice , I Suggest you run before you are sliced
Who cares about the top?
Really i will backstab you in the back
I Will win this fight
to get my spotlight


Oooh you're good

[Haze]

postin rap soooooooon

[iRateIslam]

u Both have the same problem.

Eg:


"They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
Just go home and stop,"

When u swap the last word "telephone" + "stop" make it blend, all in all nice use of vocab ;D

[InCapacitated]

when will this continue?

[Ed]

u Both have the same problem.

Eg:


"They'll be *ring ring ringing* your one inch like a telephone
Just go home and stop,"

When u swap the last word "telephone" + "stop" make it blend, all in all nice use of vocab ;D

Who made you the grammar master
I bet i could correct better than you, and faster
your grammar is so bad
you sound like a girl i once had
I dumped her after i saw her
shavin' her lower lip fur
she was so nasty
she sounded like you at a party
correcting grammar
like you held the supreme hammer
all i'm saying is
compared to me your grammar is piss.