The font is nice, render is sexy, I'm just not so keen on the background... Also you should blend the render into the background. Seeing as you like the melons so much, I think you should change the render size so it is closer to the foreground, zoom in on her, try not to make it to obvious where though.
under chuck norrises bed. yea, even hes scared of me
SCORE - 6.7/10 REVIEWyer same here. i started about 5weeks tho, and he started bout 4-5. we were on msn wen he started ans since then element ur improving at a HUGE rate. nice sig, now it is past the "needs more filling" or "insert a render" coz now it is at a certian point were u no how to do it, so were now critiquing like a normal sig, saying things such as "render needs more blending, try setting layer lighting to differnt levels". no more tutorial suggestions, although i would reccomend doing something about the fonts. nice sig though, but leasrn how to blend c4d's in better before u use them, because without the proper work, c4d looks like an amatuers work. ur inbetween. but overall, good job