need some assistance..

[H3ARTbreaker]

hey guys.

been saving up for some dr dres
got 110$ atm - need 200$

on another forum, there is a competition for SOTM and the winner wins a 50$ amazon gift card. [$199 on amazon for Dr Dre Solo HD (RED) LE]

i'm asking for help/tips/anything that will give me the upper edge to acheive my goal

i'm not saying i want you to do the sig for me, i just need some ideas and advice on how to improve.

this is the render given:
[IMG]https://i306.photobucke*****m/albums/nn255/Legify/forsakenmagefinishedbyxaj1.png[/IMG]

deadline is 23rd Jan. any ideas for starters?

[[MPGH]Doc]

That's a crap render, no offence to whoever is holding the comp.

For such a shitty render, you're gonna need to make something that'll work without needing any flow. I recommend getting a stock and creating some sort of photo-manip piece.

Just my opinion though. I have no idea what'd go well with that sort of render.

[H3ARTbreaker]

i tried adding some sharp C4Ds to it..
just makes it look shit..

i am stumped..

[Kuro Tenshi]

wait a sec modding the stupid render on this crap pc.... might get some clearance for the top.

[H3ARTbreaker]

it's hard to work with cos the electricity and fog are in the way..

[Kyle]

i tried adding some sharp C4Ds to it..
just makes it look shit..

i am stumped..

You'll have to listen to Doc on this one...A stock is the best way to go.

[H3ARTbreaker]

You'll have to listen to Doc on this one...A stock is the best way to go.

you mean combining that render with a stock to create some sort of scene or something like a theme so everything will flow?

rather than just chucking in effect or someth ?

o-o

okay thanks guys.

[Kuro Tenshi]

shit render = shit

all i can do with my pc of my job, so yeah no tablet (CS5 portable ftw).
i don't know if u can screen the smoke away? but yeah here it is:

[H3ARTbreaker]

shit render = shit

all i can do with my pc of my job, so yeah no tablet (CS5 portable ftw).
i don't know if u can screen the smoke away? but yeah here it is:

thanks. i think i just got an idea >D

[Kuro Tenshi]

woops forgot to take away the white area wait a sec.
re-uploaded... (ps relocated it to another place =-=)

[Kyle]

you mean combining that render with a stock to create some sort of scene or something like a theme so everything will flow?

rather than just chucking in effect or someth ?

o-o

okay thanks guys.

Depends if the stock has a focal, if so you wouldn't need a render. That one posted though you could borrow some effects from perhaps.