Comment and rate please

[Gab]

Please comment

I tryied to work on the focal...

[G.Andrew]

IMO A little dark.
Anyways good job

[Scrcrw]

remove the wierd low opacity black thing, ruins the piece

[Gab]

remove the wierd low opacity black thing, ruins the piece

Better?

[Mauled]

no you can still see it

up the top near your border

[Gab]

no you can still see it

up the top near your border

So what Are u talking about?

[Ryguy]

I believe this is what hes talking about...

[Fjsieb]

you tried to work on your focal but i still dont know wether i should be looking at the render or if i should be looking at the c4d or the yellow stuff

[Gab]

And like that?

[Mauled]

i was talking up hear look where the boarder of your sig is at the top part there like a mask or layer over and its bright and like a cut off of it