New Crysis..

**Dorado** · 03-05-2011

v1

Rate.
v2

v3

Rate+CnC please

**Fjsieb** · 03-05-2011

I like the colors but the white lightsource isn't the best
It's a little too empty for my taste but i like the look of it overall

**Dorado** · 03-05-2011

Maybe this second one is better?

Less emptyness.. and I changed the lighing a bit

**[MPGH]Killian** · 03-05-2011

The 1st is definitely better, imo. Seems a little over-sharpened, but its not a fatal dose, so I might survive to see your next work.
The 2nd = his shoulder is blurred the hell out, as if his arms had such definition to span 2 miles. Actually, I don't even see a reason to the blur on him at all; he is the focal point, and if he were a physical object that you were viewing from a personal conversation's point of view, there wouldn't be much depth, unless you're to the edge of completely blind.

In all, it was okay. The lighting for both needs some work, though the 2nd was an improvement. Too much empty space.

**[MPGH]Ethereal** · 03-05-2011

Needs something on the left.
Would like to see more colors, it's monochromatic.
Also, the text doesn't really compliment the piece therefore it's pointless.
Not too bad though.