Sounds cool.
Now we need a vid of she singing it.
There wanting whats needing you only defeating you, always mistreating you never pleasing you their words are only feeding you, wondering why they're misleading you, of course never believing you, deeply these feelings are eating at you, there lies are beating you whats left is decieving you.
She was afraid to post it, so I stole it and posted it.
D: You evil boii
-ParagonRex- (03-27-2011)
change your avatar
right nao
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-ParagonRex- (03-27-2011)
New at writing?
Try seperating the lines. Makes it easier to read. Like:
You ever feel like whatever you do, you always end up hated?
You ever feel like the last time you felt love was carbon dated?
You ever feel unappreciated like change in ya pocket?
You ever feel like if life were technology, you wouldn't fit the socket?
You ever feel like nothin a piece of trash?
You ever feel like every dude that wanted you, was chasin some ass?
You ever feel like a car, you just run outta gas?
You ever feel like a magician, just needa poof?
You ever feel like life sucks, it needs a spoof?
You ever feel like shit gets way too real?
Just take a second to tell me how you really feel.
I wrote that for my friend, but it's a good example.
Good lyrics though, really good.
@J Miliam ,really good
I just might my babies,babies will be on MPGH
Last edited by Jessika; 03-27-2011 at 12:52 AM.
you suck at raps.