Finally I can share

[kuytygnoyG]

Supsup? Its me
So today i finally complained to youtube, and they unbanned the video that I made for christmas (fail)
So I would like you to watch the video, and tell me what I did wrong, what should I work on next (TIPS)
DON'T FORGET THAT THIS WAS 4 MONTHS AGO, SO I 'M BETTER NOW (kinda)
HD-Fullscreen
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OY86ee9ehxM&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]
More videos coming soon
Edit:(if upper link doesnt work)

[Gael Monfils]

Lol,can't see the video
Just paste the youtube url
Edit: now i can see it
And i like it,subed

[NoJustice]

It's ok, keep trying . Color is a bit too dark for my taste.

[Takari]

Nice Video.Maybe more colours.

[toobad]

1shotkill hack? Vid is Great!

[Takari]

1shotkill hack? Vid is Great!

Nah he just sprayed a bit.

[B0ttl3]

Alright, my analysis:

You used the same cropping setting on your live games as you did on the replay. This cut off the ammo/HO boxes ad made it seem choppy.

Stick with either live or replay, don't fluctuate between the two unless you use the replay for "effects" of some sort.

Use better kills! I saw 9 headshots in the entire thing, and you spent 30 seconds or more scoped in! Nobody really wants to see you camp-kill 8 people spelling "Radakxx". Quickscopez, headshots, or dropshots are the most exciting. So is an exceptionally fast quickswitch after firing; yours was rather slow. Also, you had a few pistol kills...but only three were headshots. Pistol kills, unless they're a part of something bigger, should only be headshots. Many of your kills were single or doublekills, not really anything special.

Sync your video to music all the way through. It started with it, but it lost it in the middle.

Edit your video. I don't mean just transitions. I mean add effects, colours, and etc.

That's about it =). Good luck, and I'll look forward to the next one =)

[NoJustice]

Alright, my analysis:

You used the same cropping setting on your live games as you did on the replay. This cut off the ammo/HO boxes ad made it seem choppy.

Stick with either live or replay, don't fluctuate between the two unless you use the replay for "effects" of some sort.

Use better kills! I saw 9 headshots in the entire thing, and you spent 30 seconds or more scoped in! Nobody really wants to see you camp-kill 8 people spelling "Radakxx". Quickscopez, headshots, or dropshots are the most exciting. So is an exceptionally fast quickswitch after firing; yours was rather slow. Also, you had a few pistol kills...but only three were headshots. Pistol kills, unless they're a part of something bigger, should only be headshots. Many of your kills were single or doublekills, not really anything special.

Sync your video to music all the way through. It started with it, but it lost it in the middle.

Edit your video. I don't mean just transitions. I mean add effects, colours, and etc.

That's about it =). Good luck, and I'll look forward to the next one =)

This is what I meant but he summed it up well

[NobleBull]

very good video, but you need more kill streaks (just my taste)

[*Ex*]

Nice video and need some clours

[kuytygnoyG]

Okay, I'm gonna respond to you all, thanks for these comments so far.

Lol,can't see the video
Just paste the youtube url
Edit: now i can see it
And i like it,subed

:AWESOME, THX xD

It's ok, keep trying . Color is a bit too dark for my taste.

:Well, since it was christmas i thought of a snowfall fx so I added this, cause it's more winter-ish.But the snowfall had to go, id didn't really matched the music.

Nice Video.Maybe more colours.

:Yes, at a short video, it's really important to have nice colours.But you know, I was not really god at that time, and this is a 3 min video. But yea, your right.

1shotkill hack? Vid is Great!

: Nope, I never hack at crossfire, you missed this one

Nah he just sprayed a bit.

: xD yea
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Now here comes the good one

Alright, my analysis:

You used the same cropping setting on your live games as you did on the replay. This cut off the ammo/HO boxes ad made it seem choppy. :Yes, I agree but I can't do anything with that. You know I have to do this cause if I don't, its not HD, and that looks even more choppy

Stick with either live or replay, don't fluctuate between the two unless you use the replay for "effects" of some sort. :I think there was two live gameplay -parts in the video, those were nice, thats why i ve put them there

Use better kills! I saw 9 headshots in the entire thing, and you spent 30 seconds or more scoped in! Nobody really wants to see you camp-kill 8 people spelling "Radakxx". Quickscopez, headshots, or dropshots are the most exciting. So is an exceptionally fast quickswitch after firing; yours was rather slow. Also, you had a few pistol kills...but only three were headshots. Pistol kills, unless they're a part of something bigger, should only be headshots. Many of your kills were single or doublekills, not really anything special. : Yes, I totally agree with that, I rushed with the video. Although I think that big camping place was fun, at least for me, when I was playing. I think I had a lot more headshots, just the replay system fvcked them up. In the future, theres gonna be a lot more killstreaks (although the first part when i sniped to the music was 2 killstreaks, i didnt want to speed it up)

Sync your video to music all the way through. It started with it, but it lost it in the middle. : I think I did a nice job with that, But yea, could be better

Edit your video. I don't mean just transitions. I mean add effects, colours, and etc.
: Yes, thats kinda obvious, but as I said I rushed and its not just one killstreak, so its really hard : (to decide, where do you wanna put, which effect)

That's about it =). Good luck, and I'll look forward to the next one =)

: Thank you for the respond

very good video, but you need more kill streaks (just my taste)

: Agreed, but yea i split some of them cause I didnt want it to be a speedup video

Nice video and need some clours

:Colours will be in the next video xD


-THANK YOU GUYS

[Legend™]

Only suggestion is to use better kills.

[SteamAss]

Hey fix 1st video

[Legend™]

Hey fix 1st video

@-Boss-
Second video is the fixed first one..

[Rasta]

Nic nic video