Give me constructive criticism on my video.

[Diminished]

Wut .

Your avatar = gay

[StayTrue]

You had some nice snipes.

[Sid]

Whers the CF VIP Vid

[Son]

Good jawb.

[[MPGH]Doc]

I prefer simple editing like clayman90.

[Jabuuty671]

@Moto bruddah
black bars on top and bottom. widescreen effect is crap now.
0:23 - twixtor effect was kinda sketchy because of lack of sufficient FPS?
loved the effect at 0:42

the music wasn't really making me jelly.
i'd say for level of suspense, this didn't really catch my attention

editing is one thing, but catching a watchers attention is another.
If you're going to set an attention graph I guess, make it right
at the end I was like.... this is it? ehh more of a trailer.
the FX were good, but the fact that it was consecutive sniping and the music wasn't synced much with the kills. mmz
i'd give it a total of 8/10. the other 2 could be won over by better music and well-organized clips, possibly new clips as well

[Shadeyz346]

****** HAXZOR

[Bandicoot]

i actually like this one
used curves for cc?
the only part that failed was the twixtor part
other than than

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Very good.
Short.
Too dark.
Didn't like the 0:25 part.

[ArchNemesis]

The slowmotion was a bit.. laggyiisch?

[Moto]

@Extravagant thanks for your opinion : |
@Zephyr. thank you I liked it too
@StayTrue thanks babe and yes, i did
@headshotz22 yeah i tried twixtor, (I usually use velocity, and my settings were a little messed up, but it was 3 am, i had school so i cba to fix it )
@Wiz'Khalifa. thanks sir
@Obscene i do this for fun bro (and for mpgh)
@Diminished yeah my twixtor was fuucked, and when i was planting, i used a AAE liquid effect bro
@RAT idk tryin it out
@Tony lol thanks tony
@Sid I have one, my internet is fucked up, I can't capture clips, but I can get it for a short period time.. i think @Alen is sending me some of his CF clips to edit and i will be sure to make it a awesome video and i won't whore effects
@Son thanks sir
@Dr. Vegas I love clayman's editing haha, this was just effect whored so I could test out some stuff bro
@Jabuuty671 Yeah i fucked up on the twixtor lol This wasn't really meant to grab peoples attention, didn't put alot of work into it took me about 1 hour I do know how to catch peoples attention just didnt
Didn't really like the music either, just had been editing with dubstep type stuff lately and wanted a change Also, yeah i was seeing if i should continue it, but alot of people didn't like the music, so I will probably continue with diff audio
@Bandicoot thanks haha i used color corrector (secondary) Color curves, saturation adjust, sharpen, and unsharp mask
@[QQ]?lol yep its a minitage
@war3zbackup yep i Screwed myself up on the slow mo : |

[Wiz'Khalifa.]

@Moto any day brah

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

@Extravagant thanks for your opinion : |
@Zephyr. thank you I liked it too
@StayTrue thanks babe and yes, i did
@headshotz22 yeah i tried twixtor, (I usually use velocity, and my settings were a little messed up, but it was 3 am, i had school so i cba to fix it )
@Wiz'Khalifa. thanks sir
@Obscene i do this for fun bro (and for mpgh)
@Diminished yeah my twixtor was fuucked, and when i was planting, i used a AAE liquid effect bro
@RAT idk tryin it out
@Tony lol thanks tony
@Sid I have one, my internet is fucked up, I can't capture clips, but I can get it for a short period time.. i think @Alen is sending me some of his CF clips to edit and i will be sure to make it a awesome video and i won't whore effects
@Son thanks sir
@Dr. Vegas I love clayman's editing haha, this was just effect whored so I could test out some stuff bro
@Jabuuty671 Yeah i fucked up on the twixtor lol This wasn't really meant to grab peoples attention, didn't put alot of work into it took me about 1 hour I do know how to catch peoples attention just didnt
Didn't really like the music either, just had been editing with dubstep type stuff lately and wanted a change Also, yeah i was seeing if i should continue it, but alot of people didn't like the music, so I will probably continue with diff audio
@Bandicoot thanks haha i used color corrector (secondary) Color curves, saturation adjust, sharpen, and unsharp mask
@[QQ]?lol yep its a minitage
@war3zbackup yep i Screwed myself up on the slow mo : |

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[Moto]

@[QQ]?lol yeah, I wasn't on mpgh for a while
@Wiz'Khalifa.

[Wiz'Khalifa.]

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i know right .