My frist Edit Ever.

[weemanfc]

simple and very nice good job..

[Area 51]

nice but just fix the black part in the start

[Uncute]

nice but just fix the black part in the start

yep it should be an intro there, but i was toooo lazaaaay :PPPPPPPPPPP

[Zack]

haha very cute

[Jacket]

Decent.
Perhaps add an intro
Btw music starts a bit late.

[Uncute]

Decent.
Perhaps add an intro
Btw music starts a bit late.

im working on an intro right now.
and the music...
idk i was just too lazy to fix it :S

[Jabuuty671]

Too much dead time in the intro (about 5 seconds of black screen with no audio)
Music should come before the video fading in before, not after the video shows up
Sniper SFX was too loud.... shouldn't be 2x louder than the music.
Get rid of black screens on right and left sides, render at a better resolution for Crossfire
Flash transition doesn't match when you do a fade out before it.
missed the sfx at 0:25 (every shot should have it)
fade out the music and the clip together.

Ratng: 6.5/10
Improvements expected: Video Resolution Fix, Volume Control and placement, Transmission use, Sound FX repetitivity, Less dead time, better music, improvement on the slowing down ( like at the last clip )
Color Correction was pretty good, but if you were to make it more like this:

something like this (try it out)

[Uncute]

Too much dead time in the intro (about 5 seconds of black screen with no audio)
Music should come before the video fading in before, not after the video shows up
Sniper SFX was too loud.... shouldn't be 2x louder than the music.
Get rid of black screens on right and left sides, render at a better resolution for Crossfire
Flash transition doesn't match when you do a fade out before it.
missed the sfx at 0:25 (every shot should have it)
fade out the music and the clip together.

Ratng: 6.5/10
Improvements expected: Video Resolution Fix, Volume Control and placement, Transmission use, Sound FX repetitivity, Less dead time, better music, improvement on the slowing down ( like at the last clip )
Color Correction was pretty good, but if you were to make it more like this:
YouTube - ‪Colour Correction Tutorial - Like if you want an AE Tut or an advanced CC Tut‬‏
something like this (try it out)
YouTube - ‪Sony Vegas Twixtor TUTORIAL + DOWNLOAD‬‏

oh wow,
thanks, now i know what i can do better <3
but as i said, first edit :3
oh btw. i rendered in HD ? o.o

[Jabuuty671]

oh wow,
thanks, now i know what i can do better <3
but as i said, first edit :3
oh btw. i rendered in HD ? o.o

I'm talking about the render size. the resolution of the video.
like ___x___

[Uncute]

I'm talking about the render size. the resolution of the video.
like ___x___

its 1920x1080 o.o

[Tristan]

Very simple. You need more effects. It's to boring.

[Jabuuty671]

its 1920x1080 o.o

To fit youtubes screen? even at 1080p, it retains the black bars

Very simple. You need more effects. It's to boring.

sometimes simplicity is the beast.

[Tristan]

To fit youtubes screen? even at 1080p, it retains the black bars


sometimes simplicity is the beast.

Well i didn't like it. I need something to WOW me.

[Jabuuty671]

Well i didn't like it. I need something to WOW me.

[Tristan]

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WOW!!!!!!!!!!
This is what i'm talking about!!!