it's aight. but sometimes less is more. jussayin.
CnC
Love it, just dont like the black line.
there is no light though, that sall you need to work on
Maybe a little less wireframe.
Remove black borders
Work on flow and bit more
Nice attempt.
Also depth. I know you're gonna say that its hard to do with this but what I mean is that you just pasted the wire frame c4ds all over without covering the render too much. I would just erase parts around the render(or focal cuz i know this is a stock) just to give it more of a pop.