The blur around him is a no-no. rest is very good. ;D
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Nice, But couldn't edited the render more.
looks a bit plain. /
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-Brushes you have are horrible, and they should not be used for a background.
-For the colors, try keeping them in the same color wheel category. ( Tertiary, secondary, primary etc. )
-Text is awful and the placement needs to be redone.
-Stay away from those cheesy preset effects like drop shadows and bevels. ( If you are going to use drop shadow, and least play with the settings more. )
2.5/10
This could definitely use more work.
Orange text sucks. The colours don't match and you should've smudged/blurred the background a little. No effects...
2/10