3rd time's the charm

[artemon]

[IMG]https://i1225.photobucke*****m/albums/ee383/Artem_Cher/Signatures/Kira-Lerning.png[/IMG]

Okay, I really tried hard to make the lighting work in this sig.. What do you guys think?
Got inspired by another PSD I downloaded, but in the middle it totally took a different direction

Feel free to comment.

[Keroaplt]

Well the lighting is better but there's this big bright light on the left of your render yet the left side of her face is dark

[artemon]

v2:
[IMG]https://i1225.photobucke*****m/albums/ee383/Artem_Cher/Signatures/Kira-Lerningv2-1.png[/IMG]

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

I like it. The render is kind of boring, and I wish the shirt color was soething more dark, this way the signature looks to bright.
Can you mention me here and tell me how you did those yellow lines?

[Keroaplt]

@Splinter Cell
Lrn2smudging

[Matt]

The background looks closely similar to a tutorial signature I've read once... can't seem to find it. Anyways, the smudge doesn't work well with the render. To me.

[Mokou-Sama]

Definitely improved. Congratz!
Now work in render blending ()

[apeguy]

You kinda ruined the right side of the render with the soft brush :/ Turn it down a tiny bit.

[Ryguy]

Better than your last. Too much dead space though and lighting could still use a bit of work.

[artemon]

... I wish the shirt color was soething more dark ...

Yeah, that would have been nice

Better than your last. Too much dead space though and lighting could still use a bit of work.

Any tips for improving lighting in this tag?

[BassSR]

render looks like its copyed on......................
not saying it is im saying blend it abit more

[Ryguy]

@artemon

well the only thing wrong with the lighting that i notice is the shadow on the left side. On her face.

[.Isaac251]

Nice flow got there. Love how you smudged the effects.
Nice blending. Just add some depth..

Good Job, KIU