Need an Essay Critique Again

[Stewie_Griffin]

Info:
Type: Process Analysis
Type2: Directional
Topic: How to survive your first year at college
Specific students: Running Start Students


I want a trusted member to critique it Please post and thank you for showing interest.

[[MPGH]iverson954360]

Oh snap, I have running start in my state as well.

[Pikachu]

What are running start students?

[Stewie_Griffin]

What are running start students?

High school student who have successfully completed there sophomore year and going in their junior year or junior to senior have option to take courses at college, they have to take the assessment test if pass you can take HS class at college + additional advance class that are not available at HS. With doing that You can get you AA faster which means you can go to University right when you graduate from HS, so it saves 2 year of college that you have to go to after graduating.

[Moto]

Too much work for my brain

[Pikachu]

Ahh Yep too much work. What if you got a full scholarship? Still needa do that 2 year thing?

[Oneirish]

Running start was in Colorado when I was in highschool but only the asians were in it.

[Tryptamine.]

High school student who have successfully completed there sophomore year and going in their junior year or junior to senior have option to take courses at college, they have to take the assessment test if pass you can take HS class at college + additional advance class that are not available at HS. With doing that You can get you AA faster which means you can go to University right when you graduate from HS, so it saves 2 year of college that you have to go to after graduating.

Wow. Sounds like hard fucking work, but more then worth it, am I right?

[iSlore]

High school student who have successfully completed there sophomore year and going in their junior year or junior to senior have option to take courses at college, they have to take the assessment test if pass you can take HS class at college + additional advance class that are not available at HS. With doing that You can get you AA faster which means you can go to University right when you graduate from HS, so it saves 2 year of college that you have to go to after graduating.

yea thats worth it ?

[Lady GaGa]

The best thing to do is not ask MPGH for help.

[Pikachu]

The best thing to do is not ask MPGH for help.

Why is that?

[Lady GaGa]

Why is that?

Think about it.

[Pikachu]

Think about it.

I'm sure there are some smart people here..

[Pandemic]

too lazy

[Stewie_Griffin]

The best thing to do is not ask MPGH for help.

I have got help before from MPGH and it was helpful so I dont agree.