My First Recorded Rap

[Bombsaway707]

Tell me what you guys think
https://soundcloud.com/speedreider/collapsing-in

[Obscene]

@Bombsaway707

Hey, its Brett from music kingdom, i am getting a vB site very soon, its going to be for music and beats, ill make u staff, sense i no u have experiance.

[J Miliam]

SoundCloud is a great music hosting site. it's what I use.

[[MPGH]Austin]

err, just upload to soundcloud and link. pretty much nobody's gonna dl a media fire link

[Bombsaway707]

err, just upload to soundcloud and link. pretty much nobody's gonna dl a media fire link

Just uploaded it,

[noob555]

only problem is u sound like ure trying to hard to rhyme, otherwise its ok o-o

[[MPGH]Hero]

Damn, its pretty nice.

[Polo™]

That was expedient.

[Bombsaway707]

That was expedient.

How so?

[skate4l1fe]

is that really want you sound like? never heard you lol

[Polo™]

How so?

You were rapping fast.

[Bombsaway707]

is that really want you sound like? never heard you lol

Uhh not really, haha i was trying to sound stressed out in the rap, when i'm talking in the beginning thats what i sound like

[Obscene]

Sorry bro, but u need to keep the tempo.

[Nitehawk772]

It's pretty cool, But your voice doesn't sound like an average rappers voice. Try rapping a little deeper next time.

[skate4l1fe]

ahh
it was weird hearing your voice lol
not saying your voice is weird, i just never heard it
cause usually im the one talking in my commentaries and shit lool

OT: it was pretty sick actually, had some cool lines and shit
that final destination line was pretty baws