Extreme Green.

[Parody]

Judge it. comments, concerns, suggestions.

[Matt]

Brush, render, text, it sucks. Read tutorials.

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Pretty much what Matt said. The text has to be visible if you're going to put it, the blending sucks even though you tried blending the render with the C4D by erasing some parts.. Bad colour execution, too. Should do something to the black background, the black colour is boring as it is and whereas with no effects. Tutorials are a must if you plan to continue this.

[Parody]

Pretty much what Matt said. The text has to be visible if you're going to put it, the blending sucks even though you tried blending the render with the C4D by erasing some parts.. Bad colour execution, too. Should do something to the black background, the black colour is boring as it is and whereas with no effects. Tutorials are a must if you plan to continue this.

alright thanks...

[Matt]

If not a brush, then you just randomly pasted in a fractal to implement your background.

[Parody]

If not a brush, then you just randomly pasted in a fractal to implement your background.

well i am sorry that i am not as gifted as you guys are... but everyone has to start somewhere.

[Matt]

well i am sorry that i am not as gifted as you guys are... but everyone has to start somewhere.

Tutorials. This is a bad way to start, start the right way.

[Mr.Seyeko]

Dont let @Matt get to you @Parody
hes just blunt and to the point, hes not the type of guy to suger coat what hes gonna say, trust me, ive been down that road, and now take his comments as helpful and not as disrespectful...

Anyways man, you need to start reading some tutorials, you need help with
Flow
Lighting
Depth

Flow, This signatures flow is kinda messy and everything is wild, try erasing some of the effects to help the flow, as the guy is going from Bottom Right to Bottom Left, so try to make the flow go that way, also use Clipping Masks with some brushes to blend in the focal some more,

Lighting, There is none in this tag, you can see where the lighting is coming from, from off the shadows on his hoodie, so for beginners like your self, make a new layer cover it black either put it on Screen, Lighter, or something like that take a 200px or smaller soft round brush ( white ) and just tap it once where the lighting is coming from, where you think it should be, dont make it look fake. and then take out your burn and dodge tool, Burn makes places darker, so try putting it on the darker colors on the tag, and Dodge to make it brighter.

Depth, This also is a missing factor in your tag, Creating depth can be hard for beginners, so ill just keep it easy, stuff that seams far away or up really close to be blurred, so usually if you have an effect and you wanna make the illusion that its drifting away, blur like the top of if a lil bit and make sure it blends sorta,
If you wanna just keep it simple just go make a new layer apply the image go to Gaussian Blur put it around 1.0 or lower and then go to edit>fade blur and put it around 50 or so, where it looks good and erase over the focal. and do the same with Sharpening, but instead of erasing focal, erase the background

Text, Hardest thing in designs, if your not very good at it, just try to keep it simple, like use IMPACT font and maybe some clippy mask with a sexy cursive, font for subtext or your name.
Text can make and break a signature so just be careful

and best of luck to you bro

[Parody]

Tutorials. This is a bad way to start, start the right way.

thanks.

Dont let @Matt get to you @Parody
hes just blunt and to the point, hes not the type of guy to suger coat what hes gonna say, trust me, ive been down that road, and now take his comments as helpful and not as disrespectful...

Anyways man, you need to start reading some tutorials, you need help with
Flow
Lighting
Depth

Flow, This signatures flow is kinda messy and everything is wild, try erasing some of the effects to help the flow, as the guy is going from Bottom Right to Bottom Left, so try to make the flow go that way, also use Clipping Masks with some brushes to blend in the focal some more,

Lighting, There is none in this tag, you can see where the lighting is coming from, from off the shadows on his hoodie, so for beginners like your self, make a new layer cover it black either put it on Screen, Lighter, or something like that take a 200px or smaller soft round brush ( white ) and just tap it once where the lighting is coming from, where you think it should be, dont make it look fake. and then take out your burn and dodge tool, Burn makes places darker, so try putting it on the darker colors on the tag, and Dodge to make it brighter.

Depth, This also is a missing factor in your tag, Creating depth can be hard for beginners, so ill just keep it easy, stuff that seams far away or up really close to be blurred, so usually if you have an effect and you wanna make the illusion that its drifting away, blur like the top of if a lil bit and make sure it blends sorta,
If you wanna just keep it simple just go make a new layer apply the image go to Gaussian Blur put it around 1.0 or lower and then go to edit>fade blur and put it around 50 or so, where it looks good and erase over the focal. and do the same with Sharpening, but instead of erasing focal, erase the background

Text, Hardest thing in designs, if your not very good at it, just try to keep it simple, like use IMPACT font and maybe some clippy mask with a sexy cursive, font for subtext or your name.
Text can make and break a signature so just be careful

and best of luck to you bro

thanks for the help i like the text so i am not touching that... hope thats alright with you.

[Matt]

thanks.



thanks for the help i like the text so i am not touching that... hope thats alright with you.

You may like it, but a large percentage of people will disagree.

[Parody]

You may like it, but a large percentage of people will disagree.

@Matt

did i ever say i was making it for anyone?

[Matt]

@Matt

did i ever say i was making it for anyone?

Go to Image sharing. We are here to help you get better, and that text is horribly done. If you don't want us to tell you your errors, go to Image sharing.

[Gamersgod]

I would still say change text color, may be something like red or something brght that can be seen in green..

[Mr.Seyeko]

I would still say change text color, may be something like red or something brght that can be seen in green..

Um no... that would take the attention away from the focal, which is a no no.. Dont give wrong feedback.

[Parody]

Um no... that would take the attention away from the focal, which is a no no.. Dont give wrong feedback.

thats what i was about to say.