Originally Posted by
Kuro Tenshi
eyes and nose are fine and in a decent position, the mouth should have been turned 8degrees clockwise, Facial outlines are abit to wide *( to help start closer to the eyes since the cheek should make a curve that comes from the mouth and towards the eyes... ill redraw this in a bit when i get home how Elderfear ment it to be.
Work on the hair as the last part, u still forget the width thats required on the top rather then below...
(may sound critic and i said id C'nC u but its actually great for that ammount of time... i useally use guidelines i draw for basic thoughts.
I also will post my last 2 designs 1 with a youtube video on how i draw. and 2nd based on a image i used since my clan mate requested a BG for his PC.