Trapped!

[Mr.Seyeko]

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/Trapped.png[/IMG]
@Matt
@Doc
@Keroaplt
@Chuck
@Parody
@Cynic
@Kuro Tenshi
@Ryguy

[Rasta]

I like it . ( Colours , Render and Eyes :P )
Could you share the render with me ?

[Mr.Seyeko]

I like it . ( Colours , Render and Eyes :P )
Could you share the render with me ?

@Rasta
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/the_gas_mask-1920x1080.jpg[/IMG]

[Rasta]

Thanks Man :P Ill try to make smth

[Faux]

I somewhat like it.

The only thing is, you should fix your lettering.

If you didnt put in the title "Trapped!" i wouldn't have known what those letters said since all you can see is TR and ED.

[Matt]

Lighting and blending. Work on these key features the most; they really make the signature.

[Kuro Tenshi]

only missing the right legs lighting/overlapping. rest nice shit.

[Ryguy]

The lighting is weird. It's a little sloppy. And the text like faux said: should be legible, not hidden behind her.

Other than that it's really nice. It's a nice concept and the execution was done fairly well. KIU

[Mr.Seyeko]

Yeah text was just an experiment, i was trying to go for it being behind her on the wall or something, but i got lazy and said eff it

Thx for all the feedback (:

[Kuro Tenshi]

Then don't expect us to do a proper c'nc .
But no, why not release a non text version too... or would it be too empty then.

[Scrcrw]

drop the 'seyeko' text and the border and it will be better

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

What's up with the small barely-visible border?
And maybe, just maybe those eyes are too bright.
But otherwise I like it.

[Mr.Seyeko]

its called a 1px black border, i either make it white or black, and i dont see what the big deal is about it, its barely noticeable just like i wanted it lol...

[Parody]

i like the border thing, and i am going to start adding some to mine.

[Cynic]

I really like this one. The problem is from anyone who doesn't know the title's point of view, it says tred not trapped.