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My knees tremble, my heart pounds,
My lungs work at a faster pace, My arms bound.
I look into his eyes, I see the man he truly is,
No need to hide, no need to lie, just bliss.
He draws nearer, My mouth dries up,
He is mine, forever and I won't give him up.
He holds me tight, his embrace as warm as a cozy fireplace,
His eyes never leaving mine, and so our hearts give chase.
Every sensation, is a magical fascination,
Love at its purest state, his hand softly caresses my face,
He is my savior, there's no bad memory he can't erase.
I cannot imagine this world without him, it would be a half life
He is simply the only cure to my every strife
For he is my husband, and I his wife.
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Amazing poetry Liz Hope to see more soon.
[MPGH]Liz (09-14-2011)
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That's a pretty damn good poem.
The meaning is really good. The way you connected the dots was fascinating.
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@Alessandro10 try reading it in a different way.
@Liz honestly make more I write poetry and stories whenever I'm bored or just feel like writing and pour my heart into my poetry and just write random Books :3 You're really good Liz :P Stick to it. I hope to see more soon.
there's a couple pages here of my stuff, feel free to browse through them.
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I shall as long as you read mine when I posted them
Amazing :P I lob u <3
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Reading this was kinda weird to be honest. It's straying away from your style, which in a sense is actually a good thing I suppose. Not often do you write so bluntly, and especially not with AABB rhyming schemes. Also, it was hopeful... and warm. That's definitely a change of pace
I'll end this reply simply with what I usually tell you: I STILL WANT MORE
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