Lol fail, eyes too close together also ones like, flying somewhere while the other is sinking and the pupils make here look retarded, the mouth position is slightly off, try to do the mouth in perspective with the chin, first off draw a circle then add a triangle for the chin, traw a cross on top of it and voilla, you wont have any problems with what i mentioned above again, oh also i noticed you live in france me too, what city?
G4eL (12-21-2012)
not that far from me eh
G4eL (12-21-2012)
G4eL (12-21-2012)
G4eL (12-21-2012)
Nice try :d
1.chin is like a triangle ... i know the manga style input a geometric formes at a part of body but don't exagerate
2.eyes... ^.v when u put details on eyes put them too on all face
note? i don't want to be bad but 7.80
But don't stop , this is only my opinion
G4eL (12-21-2012)
G4eL (12-21-2012)