I'm working on a project with a friend of mine. We make every kind of genre but the first thing I'm working on is a rap. I'd love to get everyones perspective on it. @Stoney Franklin I do respect the background you come from, this may not be your kind of shit but I want your feedback as well.


[chorus]
Freedoms be flyin' oh so far away
Not many of us are willing to say
We should all fight for what we believe
Stop fighting each other, and try not leave..

[verse 1]
One another, and another, we're all alone
The voice that puts us down has its' undertone
While one and a two tries to bring us down
We won't stop fighting and will voice our sound!

From our voices to our mouths we all believe
In another time another place none of us will leave
The fight for our freedoms, it's what we all want
Big brother's here and he's trying to taunt
Us into calling one another a terrorist it's shit
If another bill goes through I'm gonna have a fit!

They allow us all to be arrested for no reason
It may be cold here but it ain't cuz of the season
Yes it's winter yes it's cold but that's not why I get the chills
Until the day I day I'll be livin' the thrills
To fight for you, and to fight for me
We'll all be fighting for the same eventually..


[chorus]
Freedoms be flyin' oh so far away
Not many of us are willing to say
We should all fight for what we believe
Stop fighting each other, and try not leave..

[verse 2]
They say we're free but I don't see
Everyone all so happy in a hundred degrees
In here, over there, we're all unhappy
The bro fist raised they're taking action accordingly

According to what, their rules? Ah bullshit!
Why don't the rest of the world see that they're full of it!
But whatever they can think of me as they want
When the truth comes out it'll be too late
All them ******s try to levant

Hmm, what? You don't know what that means?
It stands for a pussy as their protesting seems
Pointless, be maced, and disgraced by the public
Though underneath it all we're all just subject
To a shitty life run by those who we trust
In the background their greed just fuels their lust

Their lust? You question as you ostracize me
For my beliefs, smokin leafs, you call it crazy
To be against what gave us the most
While deep down you know it true to my post
Post what? Post pardon depression yes it's true
I'm upset that so many of you, would believe it too..

[chorus]
Freedoms be flyin' oh so far away
Not many of us are willing to say
We should all fight for what we believe
Stop fighting each other, and try not leave..



That's all I got for now. What do you guys think?