Trying my style again

[chaoshacks16]

Well here's my second atempt

i made it blend more, but the right side is plain

[IMG]https://i465.photobucke*****m/albums/rr11/guhell/GudSig2.jpg[/IMG]

C&C
rate~

[Plokmii]

7.6/10 right too plain but something in there >:U

[.Amnesia]

You just lowered the render's opacity.
5/10.

[chaoshacks16]

Lol no i dident 0.0

would u like the .psd?

[Ryguy]

pssh dont give them the psd...they just want to rip it

[chaoshacks16]

LOL xD

i would laufg if somone did

[Ryguy]

if anyone ripped anything from anyone...that's just low

[BSG.Flash]

At least the text doesn't suck.
Try to find a flow the next time you smudge.
That render has a really clear flow too..
6/10

[BPK]

Failed signature. You didn't even do anything on it. Smudge, lower opacity, add regular text.
1/10.

I made something at least 2x better than that my FIRST try EVER.

[Ryguy]

hes learning the basics of smudging o.o

[BSG.Flash]

Failed signature. You didn't even do anything on it. Smudge, lower opacity, add regular text.
1/10.

I made something at least 2x better than that my FIRST try EVER.

Wow.
If your going to give it a 1/10, at least give him some suggestions.

~On topic

Try looking up some basic smudging tutorials.
Next time, try smudging along the renders arms, going out towards the sides on each stroke.

[BPK]

Yes, that'd work.

Try Googling some good Graphics Forums.

[Ryguy]

ur teling him to find a new forum?
i love your advice xP