Song I wrote. need feedback

[-V3ngeance]

I can't download it for some reason.
*EDIT* Nvm, just found out.
It's sweeeeeeet.

[Fynn19]

not my stil

[Zen]

U should add some more to it one

[Oneirish]

So is the "warp" intentional?

Because it really sounds like crap. Leave the distortion to electrics. D:

The song itself isn't too bad.

Lol it's not intentional my guitar was bent some how and makes a ding noise on like the 11th fret, and I have a distortion petal for my acoustic and doesn't sound so bad. But i just wanted info on the song, not the guitar. That's all I can afford right now.

[BPK]

Well then, it's kind of simple, but not bad.

[Oneirish]

ya, thanks. I have a bunch of other songs, but that was my newest.