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    Lil Wayne

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    When I saw the title I was like "Lil Wayne? This can't be good". But this is quite good. I like the effects and the colours. What bothers me though is that the effects on the left are going up, but the effect on the right are going to the right which makes the flow weird.
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    That dam left side is going to be the death of me!

    thanks for the comment ^^

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    The clipping masks are looking too different from the rest and stand out they don't looks good the brushing was too linear and repetitive brush randomly like the left side and it would have been better

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    I like the c4d But like BYP said the different directions are messing up the flow.

    Just wondering but Why do you always have that one dark side

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    when i saw lil wayne I thought you used the render where he was leaning back

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    Flow is nasty. I think it would be best if all c4d + fractals were going upwards; like a mine exploding underneath him. Obviously non-topazed version is better. You really need a light source for the light on top of his shoulders as well.

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    At first glance it looks well done, but after looking in at the details you start to notice the problems with flow and the repetitive brushing. The lighting could have been emphasized better with a fixed loaction too.
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