Some fun with C4D. Please critique.

[bloonpop]

i'm totally new to cinema 4d, so please give me tips and advice.
here's the picture.

[SquareSpoon]

Get rid of the shadow. on the "floor" it's wayy too dark and looks really weird with the reflection.

[bloonpop]

Get rid of the shadow. on the "floor" it's wayy too dark and looks really weird with the reflection.

alrighty then, i''l work on that. thanks for the advice.

[Implify]

Shadow on the floor is just dark as the person above said.

[SquareSpoon]

Yea it just looks weird. Especially because there's no visible light source coming from behind the text yet the shadow is in front.

[bloonpop]

what would a good looking light source be?
just a light? should i just remove the shadow?

[SquareSpoon]

just remove the shadow. Looks good now. Light source in front from above-ish. Reflection looks fine just remove shadow

[The Corvo]

I like it, i got no idea how hard c4d(or easy) it is but it looks great for sure! (Agreed with SquareSpoon, shadow way to dark, reflection looks weird in it)

[The Hobbit]

Like everyone else said, the shadow is kinda too dark.

It looks good overall though. If only I knew how to work with C4D

[oldnag]

Get rid of the shadow. on the "floor" it's wayy too dark and looks really weird with the reflection.

agreed with square

[iVici]

did you use global illumination? if not, get a tutorial and use it. it makes reflections and lighting look amazing... and what everyone else said... the shadow...