Hell :o 3 and Iron woman sigs

[daniliard]

Here 2 sigs i made [i was boring all day]:


[IMG]https://i587.photobucke*****m/albums/ss319/daniliard/daniliard38.jpg[/IMG]



[IMG]https://i587.photobucke*****m/albums/ss319/daniliard/daniliard40.jpg[/IMG]


and here is my fixxed shift tilt

[IMG]https://i587.photobucke*****m/albums/ss319/daniliard/shift-tilt-2-1.jpg[/IMG]

[lostcausejr]

good job but there is 1 thang i must say remove the scan lines ty

[Ad litteram]

Iron woman?
Not Iron man?
lol... anyway, looks nice (y) =)

[SpaWn]

First Signature: Theres no blending here, the render doesn't suit the background at all. The render some main colours, blue, red and slight bit of orange, the rest is just shadow on the render. Yet your background has none of these colours, exept a slight bit of orange, so it doesn't blend at all. I would suggest maybe some smuding of the render, put all over the background and set it to overlay, and try get some of these colours in the background for a better blend. I would also get rid of the cross hatch pattern because it isnt complimenting the signature at all. Some C4D's set to lighten and screen on top of the render would be nice also, just to cover up some bits of the render. Text can't suit the signature while you have that background. The background is just horrible imo, thats all i will say.

Second Sig: This just looks like a motion blur of the render, set behind the render, and a cross hatch pattern on top of it all, and then some awful text. I would suggest some brushing possibly, and just a lot more detail to make this signature more interesting, a better text font would be good also. C4D's, brushing, and some effects are needed and a lot of them to make this sig look 1/2 decent. In my opinion anyway.

[GOD]

Text is not good

[daniliard]

The-Unkonwn nice story hmm i read it 30 minutes i try better next time.......

[blueduece2]

I like the shift-tilt.

[daniliard]

I made many shift-tilts and i will post them soon[i need put credits on them^^^ ]

[[MPGH]Doc]

Shift tilt is very nice. However i think you need to work on your backgrounds.

The first one is just the render duplicated with scanlines over the top. With the brightness turned down.

The second just looks like smudgework although it does look better.

Also work on your text.

[Faux]

Crosshatches need to be lowered to an opacity of about 10%. As well you need more work on your text. Your getting better though. Keep it up

[A⁴]

good job but there is 1 thang i must say remove the scan lines ty

They make it look kewl :P

[mexicano007]

gj nice sigs lol ad litteram
iron woman?