FeedBack on my friends first Youtube vid

[shawdey]

Hey, my freind just started doin vids and he wants some feedback
i think he is alright but watever
its an intro to his channel

[Terror In Paradise]

I found that really boring.
He was trying too hard.
All he needs to do is be himself and I think it would be better.
Also he was putting himself down saying that no one will watch his videos ect. No one will watch his videos if he's talking like that.

[shawdey]

I found that really boring.
He was trying too hard.
All he needs to do is be himself and I think it would be better.
Also he was putting himself down saying that no one will watch his videos ect. No one will watch his videos if he's talking like that.

true that.