Air Battle scene- Photoshop cs6

[Seb]

If you ask me i think it looks epic. All done by me.

[~Syphox]

Wow this is definitly pretty epic Did you really make it? No offense but pls post a screenshot of the file in PS containing the layers

[Seb]

yes i did it myself, its not hard to do... but i got no more ps file, cuz i only made the picture and saved it as jpeg. If you want to trust me trust me, and if not im sry :P

[MC²]

u need more variance, copy and paste is obv.

[Terror In Paradise]

Yeah you literally just c+p each aircraft 3-4 times and added a few effects.

[joshZ]

that's quite awesome

[αяgуяσѕ]

Looks like you found a background and just put air planes on it.
Lol

If you want to get good I would suggest look up some tuts on https://www.pixel2life.com/

[Keroaplt]

You followed the tutorial pretty well but the end product needed a little more work.
Tutorializing.com - Design -> Photoshop -> Create a Cinematic Aerial Scene in Photoshop

[HahalollolHaha]

Nice job bro, seems epic

[Whiskey]

All he did was copy and paste each aircraft into a scene and add motion blur :P Still looks cool though

[GFXDesigner]

I still say thanks for the Post and Keep it up I like seeing your work. Take their advise and Post it again.

[Seb]

Thx everyone...

[Xosmi]

It's not terrible, but it's not great either.
You skipped a few of the final steps of the tutorial, the big wingtip added in the tutorial breaks the pattern, in your piece it's really obvious to see the reused stocks for the planes.
Also the erasing of the flare over the top right plane was too rigorous, a lot of the detail was lost in it, While the erasing of the added sky was too little - you can clearly see a line where it has been pasted over, not to mention that the clouds overlap with the mountaintops in quite a few places. instead, it should be erased/masked exactly where the original sky meets the mountaintops, or a bit above it - so it appears to continue past the mountains & the horizon, instead of plastered on top of it.

all in all 7/10 imho - not a bad effort at all.

[GFXDesigner]

Good work broo! That's hot! Post more!

[Seb]

It's not terrible, but it's not great either.
You skipped a few of the final steps of the tutorial, the big wingtip added in the tutorial breaks the pattern, in your piece it's really obvious to see the reused stocks for the planes.
Also the erasing of the flare over the top right plane was too rigorous, a lot of the detail was lost in it, While the erasing of the added sky was too little - you can clearly see a line where it has been pasted over, not to mention that the clouds overlap with the mountaintops in quite a few places. instead, it should be erased/masked exactly where the original sky meets the mountaintops, or a bit above it - so it appears to continue past the mountains & the horizon, instead of plastered on top of it.

all in all 7/10 imho - not a bad effort at all.

i apritiate constructive criticism, thx

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Good work broo! That's hot! Post more!

thx man