My short rap!

[Jim]

Decided to make a short rap...

You guys suck at rapping your lines sound like me crapping,
Right here I'ma teach you how to,
You should be proud too! be in my presence,
My essence is pure rap there's no crap about it don't talk smack about it,
Or I'll destroy you,
you're just mad that your ugly and no one wants to employ you,
That's it I'm done your mum's ashamed to call you her son.

[FatAssHacker123]

That wasn't that good for someone who says my rap sucks.
I'm not proud to be in your presence,
I don't give one nor two nor three fucks!
You think you're smart? Dude you smell like ignorance!

I think someone should teach you how to make
Some good rhymes for your rap!
You're no rapper, you're just a fake!
Better just shut up cuz that was a big crap!

[unknownartist0]

You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.

[FatAssHacker123]

You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.

What's counting bars? lol

[Bernard]

You guys need to learn to count bars before you attempt to post any type of rap.

They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.

What's counting bars? lol

How to Count Bars When Rapping | eHow

[FatAssHacker123]

They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.



How to Count Bars When Rapping | eHow

Yeah maybe he has some kind of "preset" beat that he listens when reading the rhymes with no beat and it didn't sound good to him

[Jim]

Lol, I destroyed you hands down.

[kublkun]

Another bunch of ****** whack rappers, thinking that their good
you wanna be's are quite obviously from a white neighborhood
You probably should, stop living such a wanna being act
Cause the only gats you know,Are those ancient Korean hats

[Jim]

That start was sick...
Reply:

White neighborhood?
Could. You please stop talking,
Your face looks like it's gonna be stalking.
It looks seedish, hell your so white, you could be swedish
I'm living an act? you're whack,
the only acting I'm doing is pretending
to be aroused when I see your mom's rack.
Your rhymes are so shit my sack can come up with better lines.
I aint got time for your whines pls gtfo. before I make you get out.

Another bunch of ****** whack rappers, thinking that their good
you wanna be's are quite obviously from a white neighborhood
You probably should, stop living such a wanna being act
Cause the only gats you know,Are those ancient Korean hats

[kublkun]

Alright
This is where I take off the gloves and start going for the throat
You probably think your hood cause that "good" shit you smoke
But man you're wasting your time, this game is bout felonous crimes
I'm facing 5-7 years at the whim of my peers, While you thinking slanging dime bags is a grind

I know you have to pretend to be aroused at the thought of tits
Cause you're main priority is sucking the biggest, fatest, dick
And I know you think you're slick, trying to perpetuate that you're straight
But I saw right through that veil the second you started judging my face

So take you're own advice, and just get the fuck off
Cause its clearly evident, that you already lost
and I don't mean to hurt your feelings, cause I know that you're soft
But sometimes you gotta slap down a bitch to show that you are the Boss

That start was sick...
Reply:

White neighborhood?
Could. You please stop talking,
Your face looks like it's gonna be stalking.
It looks seedish, hell your so white, you could be swedish
I'm living an act? you're whack,
the only acting I'm doing is pretending
to be aroused when I see your mom's rack.
Your rhymes are so shit my sack can come up with better lines.
I aint got time for your whines pls gtfo. before I make you get out.

---------- Post added at 05:50 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:29 PM ----------

They don't really have a beat to count bars though. They're just trying to rhyme.

Yeah maybe he has some kind of "preset" beat that he listens when reading the rhymes with no beat and it didn't sound good to him

You guys must not rap a lot, or really know the mechanics behind rapping if you make statements like these. You don't need a beat to count bars, it's just easier, and allows for better flow, but when you actually get skill at rapping, You don't need a beat to make amazing bars.

[FatAssHacker123]

Alright
This is where I take off the gloves and start going for the throat
You probably think your hood cause that "good" shit you smoke
But man you're wasting your time, this game is bout felonous crimes
I'm facing 5-7 years at the whim of my peers, While you thinking slanging dime bags is a grind

I know you have to pretend to be aroused at the thought of tits
Cause you're main priority is sucking the biggest, fatest, dick
And I know you think you're slick, trying to perpetuate that you're straight
But I saw right through that veil the second you started judging my face

So take you're own advice, and just get the fuck off
Cause its clearly evident, that you already lost
and I don't mean to hurt your feelings, cause I know that you're soft
But sometimes you gotta slap down a bitch to show that you are the Boss



---------- Post added at 05:50 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:29 PM ----------





You guys must not rap a lot, or really know the mechanics behind rapping if you make statements like these. You don't need a beat to count bars, it's just easier, and allows for better flow, but when you actually get skill at rapping, You don't need a beat to make amazing bars.

Well, I don't rhyme a lot and when I do, I do it in Portuguese, so, it's obviously harder for me to rap in english. I try to do something good though.

[kublkun]

Well, I don't rhyme a lot and when I do, I do it in Portuguese, so, it's obviously harder for me to rap in english. I try to do something good though.

Ohhh, that makes sense lol.

[Euphemistic]

I suck at rapping,
Like how Lil wayne does it.

The end.