yugioh :p

[daniliard]

I found yugioh render so i did signature

[IMG]https://i587.photobucke*****m/albums/ss319/daniliard/yugioh.jpg[/IMG]

[A⁴]

Pretty good I guess.
BTW you gotta update repect list cause I changed my name foo.

[daniliard]

Thanks^^ .

[blueduece2]

The pink and blue in BG looks out of place, pick BG colors from your render, or stick very close to them. The render is too sharp, nothing is blurred, therefore it lacks depth. The text is placed oddly, tho I do like the font, it works well. Maybe some random brushing to give it some flow. But most of all you need to start blending your images more, they appear to be layers stacked on one another, the transition between layers is obvious.

[daniliard]

....hmm thanks?

[blueduece2]

This may help a lil bit..The grid here represents the rule of thirds.(I did it fast so grid is a lil off, but you get idea).

[IMG]https://i476.photobucke*****m/albums/rr126/blueduece2/yugioh1.png[/IMG]

The red dots represent the 4 more main focal points in any image. Don't ask me why, it just is. As you see, the render dead center is off, and the text is way off. Even if your render isn't in the focal areas, you want something going on there. Although this is by no means a LAW, but it's basic composition and it helps put together images that are pleasing to the eye.

[OO7]

the color scheme is aweful, the brushwork throws the whole thing off, making it look messy and distorted, render isn't blended, text is out-of-place


btw: blue, we don't really absolutely follow that rule

[blueduece2]

Read everything I said. I didn't say it was absolute.

edit: but we all know you're so awesome basic principles don't apply to you.