Originally Posted by
Snuggs.
The erasing job you did honestly, looks like shit.
Although it doesn't cut out like your current sig, it still looks bad.
Maybe try a different style, because it's hard to make these "Pop-out" sigs look good.
Once again, the text seems like the point of attention just because it's so massive and spreads across the whole sig.
Background is all roses, weird light sources, and weird ass black stripes or some shit.
Need to work on depth, flow, and lighting.
Try to make the render the focal, not the text.