Going full-time on YouTube - I need your Feedback!

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TL;DR - I paused my school to go Full-Time on Youtube. Please give me feedback on my content so that I know what I can improve over the next year! Thanks

Dear MPGH Community,

Today was the day that I decided to change my life drastically. I chose to follow my dreams and become a full-time YouTuber. It is something I always wanted to do and today was the day that I was saying to myself: 'You know what, I can NOT try and regret it in the future or I can try and maybe fail at it, but at least I tried!'. My parents gave me the opportunity to do this but if I do not get any success in the following couple of months, I will have to go back to school again.

Now let me explain something about my channel and myself. I am a commentator for games, such as Hearthstone, Call of Duty and League of Legends. I used to upload daily content of these games with commentary about certain aspects about the game, like weapons and strategies. I am currently 19 years old and I live in the Netherlands, studying Game Development - Programming.

Since I am going full-time on YouTube, I really would like to get advice on how to become a better YouTuber and Commentator. Is there something specific that I should improve upon? Any tips are appreciated, as this is my Job now. Every day I will try to improve and upload new interesting content.

My Channel: HDCommentary - YouTube

Please watch some videos and tell me what you think. I will be going back to uploading once a day starting soon. Feedback is all I want really!

Thanks in advance.

Yours Sincerely,
-HDCommentary

[MrJuhis]

I watched your livestream videos for a while. You have a really good voice and sound quality. I do not see any improvement. Continue to do with youtube videos.

Rating: 9/10

[[MPGH]Hero]

This appeared on my YouTube home page a couple of days ago. While I am not someone that is interested in pursuing a YouTube career, the video was nonetheless interesting, but I think to you this video might mean a lot more.