A sad and deep Poem/Lyrics: Wish

[Reav3R]

Here's another poem I wrote today. Let me know what you think and don't lie if you cried after reading it.

Green = Chorus
Red = Verse
() = Explanation

Give me two wings now, with which I can fly away
Fly out so far, when I end my day (sleep)
You can take my eyes for them, don't want to see
Being in pain and misery, thinking I'm free

Give me some hope and a reason to fight
With your light guide the way while it's shining bright (while I can still be saved)
You can show me the truth, or just tell me a lie
That I wanted to hear, for which I will die (eventually find out it's a lie)

Turn to left, auto theft (armed robbery with a car), he left us to run (run after the thief)
Turn to right, a sad sight (=view), (+the poor are) sleeping hungry at night
Makes me wonder now, if a thunder could be worse
Than corrupt (+police) officers, taking people down by force (opening fire because they can)
Makes me think how, in a blink of an eye
They devour (ruin) everything, leaving people to die

Sad but true, go through, an official dispute
How do you, solve a problem, with a single root? (they are the problem themselves)
Don't you hesitate, go tell them what they do (get help from people causing the problem)
Bring a trap back to hunters, be their prey too
Don't you have a brain? See the pain and despair
Take it back and make a stand, show them it's not so fair

Give me a flame now, with which I can find a way
Cry out so loud, when there's nothing to say
You can take my life, for I don't want to be
In a world filled with filth and with cruelty

Give me salvation (=peace) now, I have no hope
As I'm laying in rain (=tears), 'round my neck a deathrope (=hanging)
You could've saved so many lives but, now it's too late
Taking my last breath, I surrendered to fate

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[Rance-Sama]

#3deep5me

You really should stop writing poetry or at least not have every poem revolve around suicide. Emo much OP?

[Reav3R]

#3deep5me

You really should stop writing poetry or at least not have every poem revolve around suicide. Emo much OP?

It's the reader that decides the ending, as they could be interpreted in different ways. Maybe it's your way of thinking that leads to you drawing the conclusion which involves suicide (is that even a sentence that I made?!).

P.S.: Your avatar...?!

[Misery Jr.]

I really liked it!

I liked how you had an explanation, some of them I failed to understand

[Reav3R]

I really liked it!

I liked how you had an explanation, some of them I failed to understand

I know which ones you mean, but actually what I had in mind was different. I wanted each person to interpret it differently but I thought maybe I should post what I think myself along with it.

[Rance-Sama]

It's the reader that decides the ending, as they could be interpreted in different ways. Maybe it's your way of thinking that leads to you drawing the conclusion which involves suicide (is that even a sentence that I made?!).

P.S.: Your avatar...?!

Pretty sure "'round my neck a deathrope" and "Taking my last breath, I surrendered to fate" is implying suicide.

My avatar is based around lunacy, don't draw misconceptions about it.

[Reav3R]

Pretty sure "'round my neck a deathrope" and "Taking my last breath, I surrendered to fate" is implying suicide.

My avatar is based around lunacy, don't draw misconceptions about it.

"round my neck a deathrope" can also means that these problems are choking him like he's hanging myself, doesn't necessarily mean he commits suicide. It's a poem, don't take everything literally, try to read between the lines. "Taking my last breath, I surrendered to fate" could just mean that he won't keep fighting anymore. Again, I wrote it in a way so each person could come up with a different interpretation.

[Misery Jr.]

I know which ones you mean, but actually what I had in mind was different. I wanted each person to interpret it differently but I thought maybe I should post what I think myself along with it.

Ahhh I see! Anyways, continue making poems they're really good!

[Anti]

These are real dark dude. Also there is nothing to misinterpret about your endings. I understand you think you are leading us down to a fork in the road, but we can read into things.
@AqworldThunder is right. You need to try to be a bit more clever and make better, less emo endings.

[StunnahJD]

It's good and does sound emo type.

[Reav3R]

What's so wrong with emo endings?