Made a Wallpaper

[Pepsi Cola]

So I was originally going to post this in the GFX section but the section is dead and I wanted to get some proper CnC and some opinions, here we go! Give me your thoughts and any flaws you find. All feedback is appreciated.



@Doc @Mr.Seyeko @.REZ @Ryan @Ethereal @anyotherGFXpeopleoutthere

[Deflorate.]

The white outlines don't go good with the rest of the piece at all. Try lowering the opacity on them, or change the color to something darker and something that stands out less.

As for the design in general, it's very simple and flat. Try to make the window effect more 3d, make some depth appear. And I also think you'd be better without the nebula overlay over the wood. I'd just leave that as a purple background to the image.

And one last thing, the 2nd and 3rd window's images don't align properly and it's bothering me.

[|K.o.D| Deathrun]

I like it it's nice.

[`Rejected]

Actually looks alright keep it up!

[molot]

nice work ,good

[Justin]

Simplisity is always good!

[Ryan]

The non-congruent "windows" do throw me off a little bit like @Deflorate. said, although I think the borders are fine the way they are. They wouldn't look quite as strange on a gray bg like the original stock. Borders like that are usually meant to create contrast, so when the bg shares in the nebula's color scheme, they seem a bit pointless.

Whatever green/yellow brushing you've done around the canvas actually devalues the contrast as well by giving the sense that the nebula isn't confined.

The only other issue I see is the low quality of the nebula stock, but you can only do so much about that because it's in space.

[Mokou-Sama]

You had the background as a wooden texture. And u just darkened it.
Then cut a nebula stock and made the white outline.
Honestly that's the worst part the thick outline contrasts too much and ruins it. Plus its too simpel, maybe you should add fractals there or c4Ds...

[.REZ]

The three rectangles stand out too much, you should have lowered the opacity or blended them. Or you could be like Seyeko and just topaz it until it's dead and then some.

[Express.]

Looks pretty good, nice work.

[Deflorate.]

Or you could be like Seyeko and just topaz it until it's dead and then some.

10/10 Would lol again.

[Scotia]

Or you could be like Seyeko and just topaz it until it's dead and then some.

I love it.

[bowlcut]

This is just a copy of another wallpaper. I've seen it before.


However, you've certainly improved on it. Nice shit. Just listen to everyone else, because those white lines are pthick buddy.

[[MPGH]Doc]

It's cool, I'd prefer if you put a b&w gradient map on the background, then perhaps use a pure black border or even get a picture frame stock, and frame the three images. Would be cool.

[w4ssup]

change the white lines to chrome