oooh glowy

[Mr.Seyeko]

Something way from my style, i made the orbs the dripping effect all from scratch, the parts that arent made by me is the render and the background



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@Doc
@Ethereal

[Eternity]

Seems ok.

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[JamesWoods]

Looks like a low res render.

[KillTheNoise]

I liked the first image alot its actually really nice

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Glad to see you venture away from the other style you were using.

The good:

Composition is really well executed, probably the best I've seen from you.

You did a pretty good job making a low quality render come back to life a bit.

I like the fact that I can tell you put some time into this one,
a lot of your previous works seem rushed, ie; not enough time on adjustment layers, generic composition, meh color usage. TOPAZ!


The bad:

Lighting. That's the biggest issue for me in this one. The orbs looks pretty vibrant illumination wise on the right side.
Unfortunately the lighting on the left looks much too flat, and doesn't really hit your main focal point like it should.

Your drip effects aren't bad at all, and if it's your first time doing something like that, you did a good job with it.
I've seen people totally butcher that shit trying it out. There are some spots where your outlines can blend a bit more with the spheres,
but other than that not too shabby kid.

[Mr.Seyeko]

Thanks @Ethereal, If i had a damn tablet the lines and dripping effect would be so much better, but i zoomed in about 1200% and did everyting with mouse

i had no idea how to add the glow onto the focal till it dawned on me that i could use a clippy mask over the render and splash some soft brushing onto there.. but right now im a bit to lazy

thanks for the feedback, and ill try another go at it tomorrow or something.

[Ticherhaz]

I don't know about art as you do but all I can say is nice. Your idea is good. anyway the lighter to light. you should control it. if you want to light up, you should light the others too.

7.8/10

[[MPGH]Doc]

Yea its not bad at all. The edges of the orbs are oversharpened however, and the soft brush lighting feels unnatural. Not only does it look like actual brushing but it is casting light onto her but not the ring above/behind her, it's betraying the perceived depth that you were trying to create.