A Rap I Made

[Fucking Moron]

Please if your gonna comment stupid shit due to :
1) I'm cs, (just gtfo off this thread)
2) Cause you can't handle a rap and have to say something funny to make yourself look cool (gtfo off thread as well)

If not, tell me what you think!

When I found out
That your love for me, it was fake
Looked myself in the mirror, it came clear
Can no longer stand you dear
One last time I'll ask
Do you love me, told me yes
You are such a fucking mess
All this love in disguise
All this hatred in my eyes, contemplating suicide
I look down, find a gun on the ground
Put it to my head
Scream God save me, and I drop it
Don't know why I didn't pop it
It don matter I'm alive
Holy shit I nearly died
Tears are falling from my eyes
Then I look up too the sky
Start to open up my eyes
Find myself in my room
Starring at the memories of you
Suddenly it came to mind
Even thou you hurt, stab me in my back
Remember all those times you made me laugh
Understanding maybe this was good
Then I make my final chose
Stand up, walk away, I am over you today
No more hate, no more stress
All I see is happiness
Sometimes good will come from bad
Guess it's over, gained my closure
What a crazy roller-coaster
In my mind I start to think... wow
20 years from now this won't matter
I'll look back on the past
See this memory
And I'll laugh...

[Confluency]

You're a ****** CS and you are a loser. I'm just saying this to look cool.

[Blake]

I honestly thought you did a good job, sounds dope. I really liked the part where you went into to detail about , who am I kidding this shit was awful , now go suck some dick you fucking ******.

[Confluency]

I honestly thought you did a good job, sounds dope. I really liked the part where you went into to detail about , who am I kidding this shit was awful , now go suck some dick you fucking ******.

I liked the part where he talked about sucking cock.

[Predator]

I like the part where he mentioned he was a CS

[Eternity]

Sounds decent. I don't like rap but sounds good.

[wan]

Nice rap

[Turtle]

i hate that font ;_;

[71c]

You're a ****** CS and you are a loser. I'm just saying this to look cool.

You are very mean

[yung trap lord]

I got bored after 3 lines, is there any beat to it at all?

[saiprem]

I got bored after 3 lines, is there any beat to it at all?

Exactly, i second that.

[Oliboli8769]

More like a poem than a rap IMO.
Other that it's alright, this your life or some random bs?

[TrisCSGO]

Pretty good actually

[Galaxyxd]

Too long...

[71c]

I cant believe this nigga is on my team
I have to just carry it seems.
This is going to be bad,
I grew up without knowing my dad