Me singing + rapping

[Ash]

I really enjoyed it, Good job m8

[Jorndel]

I haven't sang before
pls criticise

Good work, it's not my sort of song and due to that I can't judge your voice
Keep it up

[Mokou-Sama]

I'm going to be honest and say it's not good. I don't like it, but on the other hand, I rarely listen to rap/hip hop nor I have enough experience to compare with others and say how you could improve... still, all I can say is that I wish you good luck. Someone will appear and tell you a better opinion, in oorder for you to improve.

[HalfBajan]

Not bad. You should start doing this more often. I loved the beginning. Very nice beats. Maybe in the rap parts, don't want to sound mean or bad or whatever, but you seem so... " dead", like you're just reading a text you know? It is great and I really like it, but with the rap parts you sound so... strange. But for the rest it is very good. The lyrics are great too.

EDIT: Just read that this is the first time that you sang a song. To be honest that is actually amazing for a first time. Keep it up!

Thanks man! yeah I was actually going for the 'dead' feel with the lyrics for the first part I guess I was going for like a depressing song yet the instrumental is kinda uplifting and chill! Idk, I wrote an English essay about an abusive relationship and then when I got home I just came up with a few lyrics and added it to this beat I was already making

Thanks for the feedback though mang, but yeah, I was definitely trying to sound blunt in the first half

I'm going to be honest and say it's not good. I don't like it, but on the other hand, I rarely listen to rap/hip hop nor I have enough experience to compare with others and say how you could improve... still, all I can say is that I wish you good luck. Someone will appear and tell you a better opinion, in oorder for you to improve.

Thanks for being honest mang I don't really know what genre I'd put it in to be honest but it's not really typical rap/hiphop. I tend to make stuff thats different to anything I've heard before. I guess it's just me trying to find my own true, preferred genre

[Jim]

Such a chill prod @HalfBajan

Chill as fuck to listen to man, sounds nice. Gj.

[HalfBajan]

Such a chill prod @HalfBajan

Chill as fuck to listen to man, sounds nice. Gj.

Thanks man!

[OscR]

should become a sad boy tbh.

[HalfBajan]

should become a sad boy tbh.

It's all about the A E S T H E T I C S
But thanks mang

[OscR]

dw, i enojyed it :P

[Bodvar]

Thanks man! yeah I was actually going for the 'dead' feel with the lyrics for the first part I guess I was going for like a depressing song yet the instrumental is kinda uplifting and chill! Idk, I wrote an English essay about an abusive relationship and then when I got home I just came up with a few lyrics and added it to this beat I was already making

Thanks for the feedback though mang, but yeah, I was definitely trying to sound blunt in the first half

Well that changes my opinion, if you sang like that on purpose, than you did it really good. As jim said, it's very chill. Excuse the part where i said that you should get the song a little bit more living. And again, good job.

[Vine]

The first part has a sick beat and the rap isn't bad, but try to put more emotion in it. For example write a song about your personal experiences and not from an English essay. Good job.

[HalfBajan]

The first part has a sick beat and the rap isn't bad, but try to put more emotion in it. For example write a song about your personal experiences and not from an English essay. Good job.

Yeah I will try that next time I just gotta try make it interesting without exaggerating

[Logic]

Pretty good man!