Is this good English?

[Obey]

LMFAOOOOOOO. He callledddd you NIGGA.

[Wolf]

Yeah but teh us pplz speak a retarded sort of english.

[Kyle]

Astrid Lindgren was born in the year 1902, to parents Samuel August and Hanna Ericsson. The family lived on a rectory, built in 1411 - Samuel was a tenant there. Samuel was a keen author *and he had good memory too. He had many memories of his childhood, often he would tell these stories to his children. **While Hanna was extremly good at languages, hanna wanted to become a teacher.
Astrid and her 3 siblings attended a small school in Vimmerby; there Astrid developed her interest in writing and reading. One of her essays was published in the local newspaper and then the village called her ***Vimmerbys Selma Lagerlöf.

A good initial attempt considering you are not english. Mine is different, in UK english. There are a couple of things which i think you need review in regard to the actual content of this piece.

* - The fact he had a good memory is entirely unrelated to the fact he was an author. We have no evidence that his books were from experience. Moreover even if this were true, a good memory doesn't make you a good author. Having said all this, books are like art and any opinion is not fact unless it is based on the grammer/punctuation

** - She was good at language, however language is not a career or a profession. Language is a skill which would be usefull in a career. Therefore i do not see how that was a barrier in her becoming a school teacher. In fact if she wanted to teach language then it can only be of benefit.

*** - Not quite sure about what this last sentance refers to. Is it a name or a title.


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[anthon0498]

Hes name is NIGGA, so?

[Wolf]

Oh and btw, is the person's name hannah or hanna...?

[anthon0498]

What person?

[Obama]

Astrid Lindgren was born in the year 1902, to parents Samuel August and Hanna Ericsson. The family lived on a rectory, built in 1411 - Samuel was a tenant there. Samuel was a keen author *and he had good memory too. He had many memories of his childhood, often he would tell these stories to his children. **While Hanna was extremly good at languages, hanna wanted to become a teacher.
Astrid and her 3 siblings attended a small school in Vimmerby; there Astrid developed her interest in writing and reading. One of her essays was published in the local newspaper and then the village called her ***Vimmerbys Selma Lagerlöf.

A good initial attempt considering you are not english. Mine is different, in UK english. There are a couple of things which i think you need review in regard to the actual content of this piece.

* - The fact he had a good memory is entirely unrelated to the fact he was an author. We have no evidence that his books were from experience. Moreover even if this were true, a good memory doesn't make you a good author. Having said all this, books are like art and any opinion is not fact unless it is based on the grammer/punctuation

** - She was good at language, however language is not a career or a profession. Language is a skill which would be usefull in a career. Therefore i do not see how that was a barrier in her becoming a school teacher. In fact if she wanted to teach language then it can only be of benefit.

*** - Not quite sure about what this last sentance refers to. Is it a name or a title.


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UK grammar=FAILS

[Wolf]

Hanna or hannah.

[anthon0498]

Hanna, but my first post is clear, i need help with my other,: This:

At the year 1926 she got a little kid and it was big scandal on that time to have childs when you are unmarried. She got help from a danish lawyer who moved she and her baby to a danish foster family.
4 years later they came back to Vimmerby and then Adtrid showed up her baby with big courage and continued her studys. 1 year after that she married her with Sture lindgren and they got a baby called Karin. in the same way the moved to an apartment in Stockholm.

[Czar]

Its better then some Americans I've seen around.

[Obey]

Its better then some Americans I've seen around.

Than *

[juanrineytor]

Gourav must has sum qualiti engrish.

i does tuu.

[Obama]

Hood owned czar in grammar

[Wolf]

I'm surprised you got help on mpgh.

[Inna]

Than *

good job!! haha