Is this good English?

[anthon0498]

Hello, i am from sweden and study English in my school. I must write about Astrid lindgren(a swedish person) on my englihs lesson and i want to know if this is correct english. If it is not please tell me and please those who is from UK or US or understand english 100% only asnwer=).

Astrid Lindgren was borned 1902 to her parents Samuel August and Hanna Ericsson. They lived on a rectory that was built in 1411 where Samuel August was rectory tenants. Samuel was a good author and he had good memory too. He remembered a lot of things from his childhood that he told for he´s kids. While Hanna was extremly good at languages, hanna wanted to become a teacher.
Astrid and her 3 siblings went on a small school in Vimmerby there Astrid already was interested at writing and reading. One of her essays in school had been published in the newspaper and then the village called her Vimmerbys Selma Lagerlöf.

[Wolf]

Astrid Lindgren was born 1902 and her parents were Samuel August and Hanna Ericsson. They lived on a rectory which was built in 1411 where Samuel August was a rectory tenant. Samuel was a good author and had good memory too. He remembered a lot of things from his childhood that he told his kids. While Hanna was extremly good at languages, Hanna wanted to become a teacher.
Astrid and her three siblings went on to a small school in Vimmerby there Astrid already was interested at writing and reading. One of her essays in school had been published in the newspaper and then the village called her Vimmerbys Selma Lagerlöf.




Fixed some stuff.

[Oompa loompa]

There are some errors ye.

Edit, wolf isn't it: born in 1902?

[[MPGH]Liz]

Astrid Lindgren was born in 1902 to her parents Samuel August, and Hanna Ericsson. They lived on a rectory that was built in 1411 where Samuel August was a tenant. Samuel was a good author, and had an excellent memory as well. He remembered a lot of things from his childhood that he then would retell for his children. While Hanna was extremely good at languages, she wished to become a schoolteacher.
Astrid and her 3 siblings went to a small school in Vimmerby. There Astrid was interested in writing, and reading. One of her essays for school was published in the local newspaper and thus earned the nickname Vimmerby's Selma Lagerlöf.



Fixed and changed a few things.

[Oompa loompa]

Yewp, that's about it.

[[MPGH]Liz]

edited a bit more.

[Oompa loompa]

Gotta use the perky words hah.

[[MPGH]Liz]

Since idk who these people are, i recommend letting this flow a bit more, bc right now it jumps from place to place.

[GOD]

@ MPGH, you learn english

ask gourav

[Wolf]

Yeah some stuff i put wasn't brilliant i was in a rush.

[[MPGH]Luke420]

hmm not bag not bag

[anthon0498]

Thank you Liz, are you from UK or US?

[Obama]

Astrid Lindgren was born in 1902 to her parents Samuel August, and Hanna Ericsson. They lived on a rectory that was built in 1411 where Samuel August was a tenant. Samuel was a good author, and had an excellent memory as well. He remembered a lot of things from his childhood that he then would retell for his children. While Hanna was extremely good at languages, she wished to become a schoolteacher.
Astrid and her 3 siblings went to a small school in Vimmerby. There Astrid was interested in writing, and reading. One of her essays for school was published in the local newspaper and thus earned the nickname Vimmerby's Selma Lagerlöf.



Fixed and changed a few things.

Lindgren was born in 1902 to her parents Samuel August and Hanna Ericsson. They lived on a rectory that was built in 1411 where Samuel August was a tenant. Samuel was a good author and had an excellent memory as well. He remembered a lot of things from his childhood that he then would retell for his children. While Hanna was extremely good at languages, she wished to become a schoolteacher. Astrid and her 3 siblings went to a small school in Vimmerby. There Astrid was interested in writing, and reading. One of her essays for school was published in the local newspaper and thus earned the nickname Vimmerby's Selma Lagerlöf.

You only put a comma before "and" if the remaining sentence can stand on it's own.
The remaining words(after and) need a subject, verb, and predicate if you want to put a comma before it.

[[MPGH]Liz]

Call me when you are trilingual.

[Obama]

Call me when you are trilingual.

Written!=Spoken

Don't mess with me