First Character Design

[Frought]

check out black characters on BT

i dont have account on it :/

[Mokou-Sama]

There is a graphic section, post there next time.
The thing is that it would look better with borders, or a darker tone on each part, like lips and cheeks, to simulate shadows. Text should be a bit smaller, or should get corners rounded. 6/10

[Frought]

its good ide give it a 7 for a beginner
aye add me on skype Hiesenbug

Added you /10char

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There is a graphic section, post there next time.
The thing is that it would look better with borders, or a darker tone on each part, like lips and cheeks, to simulate shadows. Text should be a bit smaller, or should get corners rounded. 6/10

Next design I'll do that, also general section is for everything so it's not violating the rules.

[Gill Bates]

black people are not the color of mars

Mars is nowhere near that color. It's a reddish color, hence "The red planet."


OT: 7/10
Needs a little more attention to detail and coloring.

[[MPGH]arunforce]

i dont have account on it :/

dont need one to design a char on the register page

[Plague]

I do not really like the eyes and hair are hurt

[Frought]

I do not really like the eyes and hair are hurt

Eyes? That's sunglasses not eyes and about the hair it's exactly the same as his but I think you're talking about the color of it?

OT: 7/10
Needs a little more attention to detail and coloring.

Thanks for rating, I'll take that on consideration next design.

[c0deine]

you guys r crazy man mars is definitely red

proof:

[yungjihad]

black people are not the color of mars

he was obviously talking about mars bars, you racist fucks

[Mokou-Sama]

Added you /10char

Next design I'll do that, also general section is for everything so it's not violating the rules.

The thing is that you might get Better feedback in there and improve faster, if you're looking for good criticism. generally.

[Frought]

The thing is that you might get Better feedback in there and improve faster, if you're looking for good criticism. generally.

I don't think many people are in the graphics section and I wanted fast feedback that's why I posted it in general, anyway thanks! If it's alright to post 2 threads in 2 different sections I'll do it xD

[Mokou-Sama]

I don't think many people are in the graphics section and I wanted fast feedback that's why I posted it in general, anyway thanks! If it's alright to post 2 threads in 2 different sections I'll do it xD

aint it better for hving better feedback at expense of time? I dunno...

[Salevango]

apart from the ridiculous lips its decent

[Pegreare]

It looks pretty good, but gotta say with everyone else the coloring is a bit off, also the lips.

You should look around on the internet for shading tutorials, if you can do decent shading your designs will be all the much better.