Tell me what I could do better:o

[Яaphael]

I got my first montage video...
I never used Sony Vegas Pro9., it was my first time.

Tell me what I could do better...


P.S.
I want to show my skills (the gameplay) and not high graphics effects!

[Paradox]

Erm get a name change

[moja.jst]

those light effects are too strong it is disturbing

[Milecar12]

I was laughing how u pwned the guy in 1 vs 1, I just laughed how he goes to the same way and gets powned tha same way xD BTW For the first time its ok, U r good with snipers.

[KilljoyJr]

Well name change, song change,fix lagg. The hello kitty kb's are gay too. Especially since your a guy.

[PhedoHorse]

Gay is okay !
Lil laggy but nice just fix that

[Gab]

Well there's not too much effect, and that's good like that. That's a good point.

[Яaphael]

Gay is okay !
Lil laggy but nice just fix that

Thanks for your help
And I'm not really gay... I'm just kidding.
My IGN have to be something special.

Well name change, song change,fix lagg. The hello kitty kb's are gay too. Especially since your a guy.

I like my name, I want to be something special. I try my best on my next vid [song+lagg]. I know that they looks gay, but they looks cool

those light effects are too strong it is disturbing

Okay... I [try to] reduce them next time

Erm get a name change

No thank you... I like my name, it's something special.

Well there's not too much effect, and that's good like that. That's a good point.

Thanks guy.
I try to reduce the lagg next time that the vid get's more power



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A 'lill message to all...
I'm not gay...
I'm hetero...
I got a girlfriend and I got s3x with her...
The reasons why I got this name is I like the reactions of the players when they see me and I want to have a special name.

[Boombox]

Make it less gay.

[Яaphael]

Make it less gay.

xD
Okay.
Maybe next time with other kill marks and with reduced lagg
BUT I WONT CHANGE MY NAME!
Okay?

[GRgaergaergaergerag]

Okay
I think the music is not really for these kind of videos
Don't use starbursts they are disturbing and I get a brainfuck
whatever
good for first :-)
look at neof's videos on youtube, or other famous shit
peace
Edit: oh and the frags are not really special
don't be mad at me

[Jigsaw]

Is gay, change this name.

And I don't think they will allow this, because the mod on kill marks.

[VitD]

One thing... Fix your framerate, the choppy screen movement makes me want to barf...

[Яaphael]

One thing... Fix your framerate, the choppy screen movement makes me want to barf...

I got 100 frames per second now. I think it's better

Is gay, change this name.

And I don't think they will allow this, because the mod on kill marks.

I like my name and I won't change it!

They would auto-bann the users of modded kill marks, sprays, namecards,... if it would care'em, but it don't!

P.S.
I modded my hello kitty kill marks to some more hetero kill marks.

[TheAvenger]

Well you could of used Gradient Background effect goldysh style so u could make it a little bit real and u could use Some flare and a really good intro + you could add some Earthquake when u got a nice shot