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    Sigh.

    i haven't been playing with photoshop very much lately, cos of the enormity of real life. Well, i'm close to my school break now, and i can relax a bit.

    [IMG]https://i1182.photobucke*****m/albums/x460/InstincT_/Starwars.png[/IMG]

    just wondering how badly i need to catch up.
    advice / pros / cons

    appreciated!


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    Colours don't really go together try and use a gradient map set to a good opacity & mode

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    I'm only going to mention one thing besides getting rid of the text.

    Your background image sets the mood/atmosphere of the piece. The picture has a blue haze in it however your render has an orange haze to it. You need to fix something there.
    [IMG]https://i238.photobucke*****m/albums/ff303/colby1666/Signatures/DayDream-1.png[/IMG]
    x x x x x x

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    well... i definitly aint a pro... BUT i think it is very plain
    but GJ anyway

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    Yup. What Ryguy said.

    You could fix this a few ways,
    quickest would be a photo Filter and some G-map tweaks.

    Best would be changing the hue of the render all together. Then G-map+some lighting effects

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    thanks everyone.
    need to catch up -.-


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    aight, how's this style:

    [IMG]https://i1182.photobucke*****m/albums/x460/InstincT_/Killzone.png[/IMG]


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    Better but it has too much negative space.
    [IMG]https://i238.photobucke*****m/albums/ff303/colby1666/Signatures/DayDream-1.png[/IMG]
    x x x x x x