Rap, Poem whatever

[coledes1996]

This my rap/Poem or whatever you wanna call it. Anyway you can hate i really dont care so here it goes

As the day fades to black
As I feel the need to be
As I carry more on my back
As I feel the need to be more than me

The ones I loved gone
The things I need
It finnaly starts to dawn
I need to be more then me

You always turn away
When I start to say
Why I feel this way
As my rap sprays and sprays

Youve got a new man
So why did you even care
As I have always given you a hand
It doesnt seem fair

You left me in the rain
As you ran with blood
As my gushing wounds felt the pain
I got up only to fall into the mud

You left me with scars
You left me with only the ghost
As you left and I ran after your car
You left me and I followed you coast to coast

So you coudnt care more
As you left a knife in my chest
As I hit the floor
I cared for you the best

Revenge is full of hate
Yours was worse
Leaving me to my fate
Carrying me away in a hearse

So I ask why
What did I do
To be so high
For being a fool?

I was a fool
For trusting for you

[ShAg123]

Well it was good man =)

[CyberGenius]

nice work agreed The only person you can trust is yourself!

[coledes1996]

thanks guys

[R3V]

So beutiful, i cried

awesome man, just awesome

[why06]

nice poem. Might wanna get some band-aids... =/

[coledes1996]

nice poem. Might wanna get some band-aids... =/

yeah i probably should go get some band-aids

[-James]

I loved it.

[coledes1996]

I loved it.

thanks it took a while for it all to rhyme