I really like the text in this one and the bottom loooks really great.But i think the fire in the background its kinda not needed the highlight on the shield is way too bright (for me at least).Also i think you overused sharpen tool on the render and last but not least i think near the render these red things (splash lighting dunno what this is) makes it look messy if you can erase some of them i think it would look way better.Overall i really like it but i think you can change couple of things for sure. Great job !