death

[ShAg123]

death

it comes and goes
everyone knows its their
its at the tip of your noes
its so deadly and silent

now what would you say
if you lost a family member or the love of your life
although it society knocks it off by saying it happens every day
you look into the night skies and fly away

but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle

but you can never avoid its grasp
you can run and try and postpone
now in this you will never be last
for now your in my mind zone

[Obama]

death

it comes and goes
everyone knows its their
its at the tip of your noes
its so deadly and silent

now what would you say
if you lost a family member or the love of your life
although it society knocks it off by saying it happens every day
you look into the night skies and fly away

but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle

but you can never avoid its grasp
you can run and try and postpone
now in this you will never be last
for now your in my mind zone

Lies, godmode is patched.

Nice poem

[ShAg123]

thanks man hahha godmode XD

[why06]

you've really been milking this creepy dark theme lately =/

[ShAg123]

ahhh what you mean by milking if you want something diff tell me i will work something up for you =)

[Paroxysm]

I got some bad news, you're going to die, just like everyone else, so get over it.

[Obama]

I got some bad news, you're going to die, just like everyone else, so get over it.

Paroxysm always tells the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth.

[☼§H4xεr4εvεr§☼]

Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies! Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!
None Of this is TRUE! Now Die!
~H4xer4ever

[ShAg123]

hahaha wow pax you missed the whole point but its ok =)

[Paroxysm]

No I got the point of your poem, it's just not incredibly insightful or thought provoking.

[ShAg123]

ok then what was the point?

[Paroxysm]

death is unavoidable, people try to belittle the significants of death by saying it happens all the time. Then you begin talking about how death doesn't actually kill "you".

[ShAg123]

well your half right but the last part doesnt mean that try agin and think harder =)

[Obama]

well your half right but the last part doesnt mean that try agin and think harder =)

Read your poem again.

[ShAg123]

"but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle"

Its asking a question not stating a fact =)