My First Rap..

[DeityLike]

My ass is itchy and i got no friends
I have a car and its mercedes benz.
It smells like shit but Ive got a lot of hits on my VID-E-O

[coledes1996]

Kid learn to rap
before i bust a cap
straight in between your eyes
like true lies
kid go drop your balls
before I splatter your blood on the walls

[Comet]

Kid learn to rap
before i bust a cap
straight in between your eyes
like true lies
kid go drop your balls
before I splatter your blood on the walls

Lol you'res is no better.. But I can't do better than either of you lol I suck at rapping

[coledes1996]

Lol you'res is no better.. But I can't do better than either of you lol I suck at rapping

Really I was fucking with the kid i can do a hell of a lot better

[Ren103]

Kid learn to rap
before i bust a cap
straight in between your eyes
like true lies
kid go drop your balls
before I splatter your blood on the walls

Rofl. Nice rap. But kind of stupid. He said it's his first rap song, so give him some credit atleast.

[cocobro]

lol coledes was hella lot betta then shag in my opinion

tbh u both aint amazing, jst same as every1 else about guns/pussy an killin, no meaning beneath the lyrics

im more into the underground hip-hop like vinne paz / R.A / Immortal Technique cuz they actually make sense

but overall coledes lyrics flowed and made more sense IMO

[BJIZZLE]

some1 get my man shag up in here

[ShAg123]

I herd you called XD

And this is to coldes

you tell a kid to learn to rap
but yet you spit shit you dont do
whats the fuck with that?
we all say fuck you

so here we go this shits about to blow up


crytalize in my eyes
blood sheed on street
we all live in lies
close your eyes and go to sleep

your a gun toting bastard
raping like your the best
listen to this laughter
now imma put your ass to rest

[BJIZZLE]

I herd you called XD

And this is to coldes

you tell a kid to learn to rap
but yet you spit shit you dont do
whats the fuck with that?
we all say fuck you

so here we go this shits about to blow up


crytalize in my eyes
blood sheed on street
we all live in lies
close your eyes and go to sleep

your a gun toting bastard
raping like your the best
listen to this laughter
now imma put your ass to rest

kILT THAT hahahaha

[ShAg123]

yea i dont like kids like him who rap about killing and shit it just aint me well i used to but not anymore im more into poetry lmao

[coledes1996]

Ahhh snapin at me while i messin with him spitin slow
This rap will be a perfect flow
Thinkin I rap about killin
naw most of my time i sit here chillin
and whats up with this ima kid shit
Didnt your momma tell you not to hit
on the greatest and show some respect?
When i rap it will affect
Everybody in its grip
Is it about time for it all to tip
Over and shatter on the floor
Destroyin your rap ftrom the core
And what the fuck kinda of name is shag?
You rap so bad make me wanna gag
So please step aside
before you get hit my raps stride
Staright through the radio waves
Where you will listen to it for days and days
wondering how i rap like pro
So duck before you get hit to the floor
And when I beat you you hear champange bottles poppin
"Bang" What was that sound? Its the last nail in your coffin

[BJIZZLE]

Ahhh snapin at me while i messin with him spitin slow
This rap will be a perfect flow
Thinkin I rap about killin
naw most of my time i sit here chillin
and whats up with this ima kid shit
Didnt your momma tell you not to hit
on the greatest and show some respect?
When i rap it will affect
Everybody in its grip
Is it about time for it all to tip
Over and shatter on the floor
Destroyin your rap ftrom the core
And what the fuck kinda of name is shag?
You rap so bad make me wanna gag
So please step aside
before you get hit my raps stride
Staright through the radio waves
Where you will listen to it for days and days
wondering how i rap like pro
So duck before you get hit to the floor
And when I beat you you hear champange bottles poppin
"Bang" What was that sound? Its the last nail in your coffin

Nice but u bout to lose

[ShAg123]

haha i dont know who this kid is?? XD

yo man you better leave now
befor you get in over your head
no more talkin shit now
you might end up dead

but you ask how you seem like a pro?
can tell you because you steal people lines
you aint no fuckin pro and we all know
and you cannot deny

these lyrics i put out
get you confused and thinking
and now i shout
your a fucking dead man now

im going easy for a bit
to see what you got
befor i light this up
you must never forget this is the it

so befor you think of some shity poem
i thot id let you know
im a fucking poet
not a rapper it just goes to show



rap BACK I DONT IM A POET AND YOUR SKILLS SUCK SO BAD DUDE

[BJIZZLE]

I kno u aint gon take that coledes1996 u better get em

[why06]

I kno u aint gon take that coledes1996 u better get em

Lol. Soemone's playin Devil's advocate. (hate this fkin smilie...)