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    Some of my first Artwork

    Hey guys, so, apologies but i didnt see this sub section before so i have 2 posts in main art section, they are here:
    https://www.mpgh.net/forum/showthread.php?t=1209128 (this is a rotmg-based avater)

    https://www.mpgh.net/forum/showthread.php?t=1209112 (this is a csgo based avater)

    And the 3rd one is new just here. (this is a naruto based avater)

    Please give me tips and judge my artwork so i can get better! (on all 3 pieces )

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    First picture:
    Colors do not match. Red doesn't go with a light gray. I would change the background and text color to black to make it pop.

    Second picture:
    Zoom in on the characters and blur out the left edge so it isn't straight

    Third picture:
    Nothing to say, looks good to me

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    First pic: bad decision of text style. It doesn't go well together. Colours dont mix.

    Second pic: bad quality, also we can see where you cut the image off

    Third pic: Just the quality is bad. Maybe render it in something for high def

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    Quote Originally Posted by Essme View Post
    First pic: bad decision of text style. It doesn't go well together. Colours dont mix.

    Second pic: bad quality, also we can see where you cut the image off

    Third pic: Just the quality is bad. Maybe render it in something for high def
    totally agree, the problem is the quality

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    thanks for tips guys

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    very nice keep it up

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    natuuuto))

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