Fusion

[hotdog393]

[serpentine]

text isn't good

[[MPGH]Killian]

Yeah, good, but text is distracting.

[serpentine]

I can only make out the F and O-N barley.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Listen to these nig noobs..lol. I like it dude.

[serpentine]

It's indistinguishable

[Born To Die]

Fuckuguise, I like the text.

[hotdog393]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Guys, its called a 'styled' font and besides, if you cant read it, then your doing it wrong.

[Matt]

Niggasmex. Fuck text though.

[SpaWn]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Guys, its called a 'styled' font and besides, if you cant read it, then your doing it wrong.

Stfu ****** like your shit is hot, your text is a fucking disatrous add to the piece, 'Styled' or not, cut the fucking excuses. The sig is quite nice in itself, although it looks oversharpened, with too much blank space, something needs to be added. It looks like something Martin would do, add more C4D's and look at some of Martins works to see how he makes his pieces look good, make the render seem like it's breaking out of something.

Take the criticism people give you and stop acting like a little bitch.

[-ParallaX]

Stfu ****** like your shit is hot, your text is a fucking disatrous add to the piece, 'Styled' or not, cut the fucking excuses. The sig is quite nice in itself, although it looks oversharpened, with too much blank space, something needs to be added. It looks like something Martin would do, add more C4D's and look at some of Martins works to see how he makes his pieces look good, make the render seem like it's breaking out of something.

Take the criticism people give you and stop acting like a little bitch.

xD
I think he got pwnt.
QFT.
/yea

[Scrcrw]

centre focal is unattractive

[Storm]

sex <3
add more to it though, not too much more just add some more effects cuase its a bit empty at the moment.

colours are good
lighting is good - maybe try strengthening it a bit though
text isnt half bad, for once (many ppl such as myself seem to stuff this up :/)
depth is really good too
your placement and focal point are fine too.

[hotdog393]

if "text isn't good" counts as constructive feedback then I'm not right in the head. if he had said why it wasn't good then that's understandable. anyways second version added.

[[MPGH]Killian]

.... said it was good, but text was distracting... das all...