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[Kuro Tenshi]

yeah im going for an start on my manga ... it aint going that well got a huge block all i have made in afew minutes was this thing, the story im going for Kuro Tenshi also know as a black angel, appearently i was tought correct about what it ment on wiki it said: an angel bannished from heaven, i tought it was a fallen angel from heaven -.- meh.
here is a small part i quickly scetched + its gona be better look and animated when this weekend i hope ;D, still dont know wich to do age looking loli or teen/adult style for angel it seems loli fits but dark angels :| idk.

[Dested]

wtf is this crap

[Ryan]

Keep at it bro.
Looking pretty good.

[Matt]

I really want to give this good props, I really do... but I can't say this is well drawn out manga/anime style. I've seen better, and you could really work on the face proportions. It's really off.

But nevertheless, it's good that you're gonna work on a manga.

[Kuro Tenshi]

I really want to give this good props, I really do... but I can't say this is well drawn out manga/anime style. I've seen better, and you could really work on the face proportions. It's really off.

But nevertheless, it's good that you're gonna work on a manga.

"here is a small part i quickly scetched + its gona be better look and animated when this weekend i hope ;D"

if u read it better :3

[Empire]

tbh, you could just make it a flash and i would like it more.


Work on the falling figure, its un-related to the angel in form.

[shahin7777]

You can't draw for shit!:P

[Empire]

Another thing i'll just add for sake of gfx judgement.

This is reaaaally newbie drawing. Gonna be 100% honest here, people draw better stuff like this all the time, and they even make it into flash.

[Kuro Tenshi]

Another thing i'll just add for sake of gfx judgement.

This is reaaaally newbie drawing. Gonna be 100% honest here, people draw better stuff like this all the time, and they even make it into flash.

yeah i dont like flash that well...

why does everyone rate on a scetch i made in afew minutes... + i can use this as a guidline on flash if i import it.

[Matt]

Another thing i'll just add for sake of gfx judgement.

This is reaaaally newbie drawing. Gonna be 100% honest here, people draw better stuff like this all the time, and they even make it into flash.

I think he also means your finished drawings. I meant all your drawings, tbh they are ALL disproportionate.

[Kuro Tenshi]

I think he also means your finished drawings. I meant all your drawings, tbh they are ALL disproportionate.

ah yeah i dont like flash/fireworks so i keep at ps but my tablet has pressure so i cant do fat lines that wel and pentool... i can use but whats the use of the tablet then ;D

i have an idea for lines... pencil 2px... then use fill, like fireworks. or make frames in firworks it doesnt have pressure detector.

[Matt]

Just to say, all your drawing's faces are too fat.

[serpentine]

You can turn off pressure detector in PS CS5