Try to blend your render more and stick to a color scheme. Text could be better.
Why the fuck is the render that color?!
name13 is right why is the render is that color worst choice ever
take the render out completely the background is much more interesting
OK change the render and your good
Even worse..render isn't good.
Font was good before. Don't listen to them. Use whatever font you like best
~Gifts~
Thanks Evelyn for avatar